作文：
Harmful Plagiarism In academic field in China
As is known to all， Plagiarism is becoming more and more popular in academic field in our country， Which brings serious hurt to the creative and technology.
Firstly， Plagiarism don't respect the author's effort which will hurt the creative thinking. Secondly, plagiarism destroy the academic atmosphere and environment. Peculiarism is a Dishonest behavior and set a bad example to the society. Thirdly, plagiarism is harmful to the 国际形象 Of China。
In conclusion, plagiarism is a dishonest behaviour which will influence in long time. This phenomenon must be stopped in order to make the academic environment become more and more healthy."
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@华吉俊¹³³⁵⁴⁹⁹²⁰⁶¹ 给您批改了下作文：总体来说，结构完整有条理，但是文章还是有很大的进步空间，第一：出现了部分语法错误：例如：Which brings serious hurt to the creative and technology，and前后连接了形容词和名词，可以将前面的creative改为creation或者creative thinking。第二：论点展开的比较简单，大部分都是个人观点，没有实例或者事实，不够有说服力。总体得分为10分
