On well writing—chapter 18

WORDS

1.Summon

Smalltown reporters dream of the moment when their editor will summon them to cover the pianist or the ballet troupe or the repertory company that has been booked into the local auditorium.

1.If you summon someone,you order them to come to you.

Eg.Alan summons the doctor.

The court summons Alan.

2.if you summon qualities, such as strength and courage,you make every effort to be brave.

Eg. It took her a full month to summon the courage to tell her mother.

她用了整整一个月才鼓足勇气告诉了妈妈。

Summon =summon up

在文中应该是第一种意思,传唤,命令他们做某事


2.Minted

It’s also where reputations for wit are born. The American vernacular is rich in epigrams(警句)(“She ran the gamut of emotions from A to B”)minted by people like Dorothy Parker and George S. Kaufman, who became famous partly by minting them

If you describe something as newly minted or freshly minted, you mean that it is very new, and that it has only just been produced or completed. 崭新锻造的

Eg.He seemed to be pleased by this newly minted vehicle.

他似乎很满意这辆新出厂的车。

the movie's freshly minted script.

这部电影新鲜出炉的剧本

仿写:This is the newly minted masterpiece by the author.

3.Linger

We can almost see the camera lingering with studied sluggishness over the family crystal.

When something such as an idea, feeling, or illness lingers, it continues to exist for a long time, often much longer than expected.继续留存

The scent of her perfume lingered on in the room...

她的香水味道在房间里久久不散。

A guerrilla war has lingered into its fourth decade...

一场游击战已经持续了30多年。

仿写:This case has lingered about 10 years.

4.Savor

What you do have to do, if you are assessing the first novel of a Southern author and weighing Faulkner’s influence, is to generate a provocative idea and throw it onto the page, where your readers can savor it.

(1).to enjoy the taste or smell of (something) for as long as possible

He savored the aroma of the baking pies.

They savored every last morsel of food.

(2).to enjoy (something) for a long time

She was just savoring the moment.

The team is still savoring its victory.

Enjoy,relish 的同义词,文中是说让读者能喜欢。

仿写:I am savoring the time with you.

Provocative 挑衅的,有争议的

Provoke 挑衅,激怒

5.Intertwine

Movies are intertwined with our daily lives and attitudes, our memories and myths.

If one thing intertwine with another thing,they two are closely connected.

Eg. Their destinies are intertwined...

他们的命运交织在一起。

记忆:inter 相互的

Twine ,麻线。 相互缠绕在一起,密切联系

仿写:Mental health intertwine with our lives.

以后表达。。。与。。密切相关,就可以用这个表达

REFLECTION

在阅读这章时,我似乎不能很好地identify with Zinser.或许是对art这个题材的评论,平时接触地比较少,所以无法很好地体会怎样才是好的评论,加之这章的生词和结构让我很难懂。所以就读了个一知半解。

One is that critics should like—or, better still, love—the medium they are reviewing. If you think movies are dumb, don’t write about them.
criticism is only one person’s opinion. But he should go to every movie wanting to like it. If he is more often disappointed than pleased, it’s because the film has failed to live up to its best possibilities.This is far different from the critic who prides himself on hating everything.

对于这段话我是这样理解的:如果你觉得一个影片很无聊,还是不要去评论的为好。因为喜好是一个很主观的事,这仅代表了个人观点。所以我认为zinser想说的是,如果你被自己的喜好所支配,你就会有失偏颇。当一个评论家在看影片时,要尽量去喜欢它,但是始终还是失望大于享受的话,这才说明时那部影片没有达到所要的效果。这和你用否定他人来体现自己的优越是截然不同的。所以zinser还是很强调客观的。

don’t give away too much of the plot. Tell readers just enough to let them decide whether it’s the kind of story they tend to enjoy, but not so much that you’ll kill their enjoyment.

这可能可以部分体现我们所说的“剧透”吧。确实,影评人应该把握的“度”很重要。需要先很客观地传达这是怎样的一个故事,但又不能太用力,说了太多,大家可能觉得都没什么好看的了。

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