【学号】I15煎鸡蛋
【前言】
★ 常言道：“温故而知新”。那么趁写作计划进行到一半时候，开始对之前写的东西进行“翻新”吧！
★ 明日关于范文分析部分中的重点表达方法添加例句和小练习~
【文章】
Spring transportation, conventionally occurring during the Spring Festival in China, is one of the most marked phenomena with tens of thousands of people involved, can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration.During this time, with transportation jammed, numbers of people soared, car bus station fullfilled crammed, the whole country is undergoing making a earthshaking homecoming journey to homecoming.
The essential key causes to drive up numbers to moving are down to three factors.Firstly, peasant workers swarm to urban areas in a bid to chase after better-of living conditions for their beloved relatives left behind in rural field.Secondly, a fourty-day period spanning holiday enable the middle class relieve themselves from pressing work time, while increasing afluent income salary permits them tour around.And thirdly, migrants afloat drift far away from their hometown, are gragvitate towards their missing family members especially during the Spring Festival.
Despite of buzzing cacophonous crowds and exhaustive exhauted transportation, burning nostalgia for long-departed homes never fades. Considering the vast expense of China, it at least take more than thirty days from for an individual came back home from northren part to sorthern rural area, if not stuck amidst an avalanche of crowds congested area, considering the vast expense of China. At no time will chinese stay far afield from their home, for the Spring Festival has been consistently inherited for thousand years and has deep roots in every single Chinese people.This impressive phenomenon in China signifying the most fundamental merit--filial piety. As the old Chinese saying goes, "whenever you go, your mother will always be missing you." A urgent call for family reunion brings migrants and their family together regardless of far distance between them.
【范文】
The definition unique occurrence in China, chunyun, or the Spring festival Travel Rush, can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration. Despite rapid urbanization the allure of returning to the hometown for the Spring Festival, the tradition that has been cherished since ancient times, is stronger than anything else.
The peasant workers contribute most to chunyun as they work in economically vibrant cities while leaving their families behind. Moreover, journey is made by holiday tourists are increasing. However, the relocation of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces helps ease the flow. Furthermore, the elderly travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children. This reverse route also helps slow down the frantic training.
In my opinion, fruit of urbanization through chunyun appears to be, it embodies the familial values we have been cherishing for centuries. In spite of the higher travel costs, the expected extravagant spending on gifts, and other festival items and bumpy road back home in terms of several pratfalls in securing in a train ticket, most Chinese people choose to drop any business at hand just too desperately go back home in the hope of celebrating the most solemn festival with their families. The hubbub on the crowded and often suffocate coaches and trains can never quench their burning nostalgia for long-departed homes. Their pampering spending on their families mirrors a champion of love even though the money they well be earned painstakingly through travail over many furiously sleepless nights in sweatshops.
In China whose social welfare epitomize its fair coverage of every citizen, some systems such as hukou and the soaring housing prices in cities have successfully prevented migrant workers from settling in their work places, thus resulting in this gushing rush. So a generously defined social welfare system must be a panacea for this swelling in travel, or chunyun is doomed a chronic fight-or-flight issue.
【范文精析】
① The definitely unique occurrence in China, chunyun, or the Spring festival Travel Rush, can be ranked as the largest scale of annual human migration. Despite rapid urbanization the allure of returning to the hometown for the Spring Festival, the tradition that has been cherished since ancient times, is stronger than anything else.
【行文分析】
"第一段首先指出了春运是中国的独特现象，对春运进行了定义。"
【表达】
★ be ranked as
★ the largest scale of
★ the allure of
② The peasant workers contribute most to chunyun as they work in economically vibrant cities while leaving their families behind. Moreover, journey made by holiday tourists are increasing. However, the relocation of some industries from coastal cities to inland provinces helps ease the flow. Furthermore, the elderly travel from the countryside to the cities to reunite with their children. This reverse route also helps slow down the frantic training.
【行文分析】
“第二段中，作者分析了春运现象产生的原因，介绍了从城市向农村流动和从农村向城市流动两条春运路线的情况。”
【表达】
★ contribute most to
★ economically vibrant cities
★ journey made (by)
★ helps ease
★ reunite with
③ In my opinion, fruit of urbanization through chunyun appears to be, it embodies the familial values we have been cherishing for centuries. In spite of the higher travel costs, the expected extravagant spending on gifts, and other festival items and bumpy road back home in terms of several pratfalls in securing in a train ticket, most Chinese people choose to drop any business at hand just too desperately go back home in the hope of celebrating the most solemn festival with their families. The hubbub on the crowded and often suffocate coaches and trains can never quench their burning nostalgia for long-departed homes. Their pampering spending on their families mirrors a champion of love even though the money they well be earned painstakingly through travail over many furiously sleepless nights in sweatshops.
【行文分析】
“第三段中，作者说明了自己的观点，肯定的，春运体现的是中国传统文化中重视家庭亲情的价值观。”
【表达】
★ embodies
★ familial values we have been cherishing
★ In spite of
★ in terms of
★ in the hope of
★ bumpy
★ hubbub on
★ quench their burning nostalgia for
★ mirrors a champion of
★ earned painstakingly through travail over
★ furiously
★ sweatshops
④ In China whose social welfare epitomize its fair coverage of every citizen, some systems such as hukou and the soaring housing prices in cities have successfully prevented migrant workers from settling in their work places, thus resulting in this gushing rush. So a generously defined social welfare system must be a panacea for this swelling in travel, or chunyun is doomed a chronic fight-or-flight issue.
【行文分析】
“第四段中，作者提升了主题，从宏观的角度提出解决春运问题的方法，即中国的福利系统应该支持民工在他们的工作城市定居。”
【表达】
★ thus resulting in
★ be a panacea for
★ swelling in travel
★ a chronic fight-or-flight issue
