手机与学习的关系
You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school.
你应该以对图片的简要描述开始你的文章，然后评论孩子对去学校的理解学校
“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”
“如果我的手机已经知道了一切，为什么我还要去上学？”
写作提纲
- 一、提出观点:
手机在学习中虽然重要但并非必不可少
play an important but not indispensable role
- 二、论证观点：
1、学生自身应具有很好的知识储备
have a good command of
2、我们的个人知识促进了手机的发展
personal knowledge
- 三、总结观点：
l、过度依赖手机弊大于利
over-dependence on phones does more harm than good
2、要平衡好手机与知识学习的关系
balance the relationship between phones and study
范文
The Role of Phones in Study 手机在学习中的作用
What the drawing vividly depicts is that a pupil asks his mother why he is going to school since his phone already knows everything.
漫画生动地描述了一个小学生问他的母亲，既然他的手机已经无所不知，为什么还要去上学。
The picture illustrates that some students are highly dependent on their phones, overlooking the importance of personal study.
这幅漫画揭示了这样一个现象:一些学生高度依赖手机,而忽视了个人学习的重要性。
However, as far as I am concerned, phones play an important but not indispensable role in students’ learning.
然而，我认为，手机在学生们的学习中虽然重要但并非必不可少。
There is no denying that mobile phones have brought much convenience, but we are not supposed to rely on them too much in the process of study.
毫无疑问，手机给我们带来了很多便利，但是在学习过程中，我们不应该过度依赖手机。
In the first place, we should have a good command of knowledge on our own to cope with various situations without phones at hand.
首先,我们自身应该具有很好的知识储备以应对没有手机在手边时的各种情况。
In the second place, it is our personal knowledge that promotes the development of phones.Without the basic education at school, phones would not be invented.
其次，正是我们的个人知识促进了手机的发展。如果没有学校的基础教育，就没有手机的问世。
All in all, over-dependence on phones does more harm than good.
总而言之，过度依赖手机弊大于利。
Therefore, we should properly balance the relationship between phones and study.
因此，我们应该合理地平衡手机与学习的关系。
Only in this way can we benefit most from our learning process.
只有这样我们才能够从学习过程中获得最大的收益。
短语
be highly dependent on…高度依赖…
overlook忽 视 ， 忽 略
indispensable必不可少的；
be supposed to …应该…
have a good command of …很好地掌握…
at hand在手边
in the first place ...首先
in the second place...其次
现代生活
写作提纲
- 一、提出观点：
电脑在日常生活中虽然重要但并非必不可少
an important but not indispensable role
- 二、论证观点：
1、过度沉迷于电脑对我们的健康不利
exert a negative impact on our health
2、过度使用电脑会将我们隔离在社交圈之外
isolate us from the social circles
- 三、总结观点：
- l、电脑确实改善了我们的生活
really promote our life
- 2、不应该在电脑上花费过多的时间而舍弃享受美好的生活
should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life
范文
This Modern Life
In the picture is a person using his computer all day, whether he is at work, at home, playing or in his sleep.
漫画中是一个人,一天当中他无时无刻不在使用电脑，不论是在工作时、在家时、玩游戏时，还是在睡眠中。
This drawing vividly depicts a common phenomenon that computers nowadays deeply penetrate into our daily life and we can not do without it even for a minute.
这幅漫画生动地描述了一种普遍现象：电脑现在深深地渗透到我们的日常生活中，我们甚至一分钟都不能没有它。
However, from my perspective, computers play an important but not indispensable role in our modem life.
尽管如此，在我看来，电脑在现代生活中虽然重要但并非必不可少
It is true that computers make our life convenient and provide instant assistance.
诚然，电脑使我们的生活方便，并提供及时帮助。
But it is not a necessity.
但它并非生活必需品。
To start with, excessive addiction to computers may exert a negative impact on our health.
首先，过度沉迷于电脑对我们的健康不利。
Instead of taking exercise in our spare time, we may be intrigued by the various contents on it.
我们可能着迷于电脑上五花八门的内容而忽略了在业余时间锻炼身体。
Furthermore, indulging in computers may isolate us from the social circles. Since we can chat with the virtual friends via computers, we may not bother to communicate with families or Mends around us.
此外，过度使用电脑会将我们隔离在社交圈之外因为我们可以通过电脑与虚拟世界中时朋友交谈，所以我们可能不会费心去与身边的亲朋好友交流。
In conclusion, as the product of the high technology, computer really promotes our life.
总之，作为高科技的产物，电脑确实改善了我们的生活。
Nevertheless, we should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life.
但是我们不应该在电脑上花费过多的时间而舍弃享受美好的生活。
短语
使用
to start with和furthermore,从两个方面展开论证，层次分明。
使用in conclusion和nevertheless总结观点并提出建议。
penetrate into渗入，渗透 ；
from one’s perspective在某人看来；
indispensable必不可少的；
instant assistance及时帮助 ；
necessity必需品；
be intrigued by...对…着迷；
savor享受，欣赏
做自己命运的主人
写作提纲
- 一、描述图片：
女孩考人了妈妈心中的理想大学
was accepted to the college of your choice.
- 二、分析现象：
1、家长为孩子做决定的普遍性
It is such a common thing nowadays that parents make a lot of decisions for their children...
2、诸多原因
a wiser choice, only child, unfulfilled dreams
- 三、提出建议：
l、年轻人应该自己做决定
make decisions by themselves
2、成为自己命运的主人
to be master of their own fate
范文
Being Master of Your Own Fate 做自己命运的主人
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young girl is telling her mother, “Good news, I was accepted to the college of your choice. ”
正如图片中生动描绘的那样，一个女孩正在告诉她的妈妈：“好消息，我被你选择的大学录取了。
But ironically，the three words “ of your choice ” reveal the truth that the dream which has just come true does not belong to the girl at all.
但讽刺的是，“你选择的”这几个字揭露了一个事实，那就是这个刚刚被实现的梦想并不属于这个女孩。
It is such a common thing nowadays that parents make a lot of decisions for their children，even at the major turning points of their life, including choosing colleges and majors, hunting for a job or getting married.
现如今的一个普遍现象是父母为孩子做很多决定，甚至在他们人生的重大转折点，包括选择大学和专业、找工作或是结婚。
Several reasons account for this phenomenon.
很多原因可以解释这一现象。
First of all, parents always think that they are able to make a wiser choice than teenagers .
首先，父母总是认为他们可以比孩子做出更明智的决定。
⑥Also，they attach too much attention to their only child in the family.
而且，对于家里的独生子女，父母给予了太多的关注。
What's more, it seems to be the only way to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting their children do things that they want them to.
此外，父母让孩子做他们想让孩子做的事情，好像这是实现他们自己未实现的梦想的唯一途径。
For teenagers, there is a long way to go in their life. They will finally make decisions by themselves.
对青少年来说，人生道路很漫长。
To be master of their own fate is a great step in their growth.
他们最终要自己做决定。而成为自己命运的主人是成长过程中的一大步。
短语
通过
ironically—词指出图片的讽刺意味。
vividly生动地
ironically讽刺地
turning points转折点
phenomenon现象
unfulfilled未实现的
倾听比谈论更重要
题目
"Listening is more important than talking?" You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others' opinions.
倾听比谈论更重要
写作提纲
- 一、阐述“倾听比谈论更重要”的内涵:
倾听别人的意见比表达自己的想法重要得多
paying attention to others’ opinions is much more important than expressing one’s own words
- 二、分析原因：
1、倾听可以表达对他人的尊重
listening shows your respect for others
2、倾听还可以使听者受益
benefit yourself
- 三、总结概述：
l、倾听在很多场合比谈论重要得多
listening truly outweighs talking on many occasions
2、我们需要掌握一些沟通技巧
master some communication skills
范文
Listening Is More Important than Talking 倾听比谈论更重要
Nowadays an old saying, “Listening is more important than talking” , comes into vogue.
如今,“倾听比谈论更重要”这一格言流行起来。
The saying tells us the true essence of communication with others in the society, which means paying attention to others’ opinions is much more important than expressing one’s own words.
这句格言道出了在社会中与人交往的真诗:倾听别人的意见比表达自己的想法重要得多。
As for me, there are two reasons accounting for the correctness of this principle.
就我而言，有两个原因可以解释该准则的正确性。
To start with, listening shows your respect for others.
首先，倾听可以表达对他人的尊重。
In such a competitive society, willingness to listen can make you gain trust and friendship, which is the basic rule of socialization.
在这样一个竞争激烈的社会，乐于倾听可以为自己赢得信任和友谊，而这恰恰是我们社交的基本准则。
A talkative person without ear is doomed to be alienated.
一个夸夸其谈而不善于倾听的人注定要被孤立.
Furthermore, listening can really benefit yourself.
此外,倾听可以使自己受益。
There is no denying that you are the one to make choices in your life.
毋庸置疑，你是自己命运的主宰。
However, a variety of ideas from others will definitely enrich your mind and present some enlightenment to your future actions.
然而，他人的不同观点肯定会丰富你的头脑，并为今后的行动带来启迪。
According to what is said above, listening truly outweighs talking on many occasions.
综上所述，在多场合，倾听确实比谈论更重要。
In modem society, we need to master some communication skills.
在现代社会中，我们需要掌握一些沟通技巧。
Only when we realize the importance of listening can we lead a better life.
我们只有认识到倾听的重要性，才能过上更好的生活。
短语
使用
As for me, there. are two reasons accounting for…引出原因
使用To start with…Furthermore…具体列举不同的原因，层次分明
用According to what is said above …总结论述
终身学习
题目
"Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission. " You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning.
终身学习
写作提纲
- 一、引出话题:
终身学习很重要
the importance of lifelong learning
- 二、论证重要性：
在信息时代，必须通过不断学习，紧跟时代步伐
keep pace with the times through ceaseless leaning
1、使用打车软件（a Taxi App)的出租车司机比不用软件的司机挣得多
2、—个开网店的家庭主妇甚至比白领职员挣得多
out-earn a white-collar worker
- 三、深化主题、总结全文:
活到老、学到老；只有不断学习，才能在迅速发展的社会中实现肖身潜能（achieve our potential),生活得更好(live a better life)
范文
Learning Should Be a Lifelong Process 学习应该是一个终身的过程
It is often said that learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.
常言道：学习是一种日常体验和终身使命。
The saying indicates the importance of lifelong learning, which we have been lectured over and over again.
这句话揭示了终身学习的重要性，这也是我们被反复教导的一个道理。
Life long learning is crucial to our life and career in modem society.
终身学习在现代社会对于我们的生活和事业至关重要。
Living in the Information Age, we have to keep pace with the times through ceaseless learning; otherwise, will be too outdated to seize any opportunities.
生活在信息时代，我们必须通过无止境的学习来紧跟时代步伐，否则，将会因落伍而失去很多机会。
For example，a taxi driver who learns to use a Taxi App such as Didi can make much more money than those who don’t;
例如，一个学习使用诸如滴滴打车之类软件的出租车司机,比不用打车软件的司机要挣得多得多；
a housewife who opens a shop online can even out-earn a white-collar worker.
一个开网店的家庭主妇甚至比白领职员挣得多。
All of their success can be attributed to their constant learning in addition to the progress of technology.
他们的成功除了归功于科技进步外，还归功于他们的不断学习。
As an old saying goes, it is never too old to learn.
俗话说得好：活到老，学到老。
Thus, learning is an attitude regardless of age.
因此，学习是一种态度，无关乎年龄。
Only through learning ceaselessly can we achieve our potential and live a better life in this rapidly developing society.
只有通过不断学习，我们才能在当今迅速发展的社会中发挥自身潜能，生活得更好。
做参与者而不是旁观者
题目
" Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen." You can cit examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life.
不做看客，要做实践者
范文
Be Participants Rather than Onlookers 做参与者而不是旁观者
Just as the saying goes, never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen.
正如俗话所说，永远不要去那里看发生了什么，去那里让事情发生。
It obviously emphasizes the importance of being participants instead of mere onlookers in life.
There are several reasons accounting for it.
它显然强调了在生活中成为参与者而不仅仅是旁观者的重要性。
To start with, you will never learn the essence of life unless you try something on your own.
首先，除非你自己尝试一些东西，否则你永远也学不到生命的本质。
Whether it’s a success or a failure, it will make your life more colorful. Furthermore, chances are only for those who are brave enough to challenge themselves.
无论是成功还是失败，它都会让你的生活更加丰富多彩。此外，只有那些敢于挑战自己的人才有机会。
They tend to have more choices and opportunities than others.
他们往往比其他人有更多的选择和机会。
Last but not least, Rome is not built in one day.
最后但并非最不重要的一点是，罗马不是一天建成的。
Only if you are a doer rather than a watcher can you get life-long valuable experience.
只有当你是一个实干家而不是一个观察者，你才能获得终身的宝贵经验。
It is no exaggeration to say that many of the young generations prefer to be onlookers, which seems to be easier and less stressful.
可以毫不夸张地说，许多年轻一代更喜欢旁观者，这似乎更容易，压力更小。
But this kind of attitude is devastating.
但这种态度是毁灭性的。
We should start making a change by applying what we have learned into practice, and play our part in bettering our world, which will finally benefit not only ourselves but also the future generations.
我们应该开始改变，把我们学到的知识应用到实践中，并在改善我们的世界中发挥我们的作用，这将最终不仅造福于我们自己，也造福于子孙后代。
短语
put…into practice将……付诸实践
carry out执行；实现
gain获得
accumulate积累
gradually逐渐地
make a progress取得进步
theory理论
action行动
would rather…than比起……更情愿……
stand by袖手旁观
句式拓展
1.For some people, watching what happens to others is good enough to learn a lesson
对一些人而言，看发生在别人身上的事情足以让他们吸取教训
while for others, only practicing by themselves can finally make them get the real skills in
而对于其他人而言，他们只有亲身实践才能最终得到生活中的真正技能.
2.No matter how many authentic theories you've got before, nothing will happen until you put them into practice.
无论你曾经接受了多少权威的理论，若不付诸实践，一切都无济于事.
