一、开头段(30-40字)
二、中间段(90-110字)
总起句. 1. _____. _____. 2._____. ______. 3. _____. ______.
1.利弊论证
【框架】
考虑到……在我们的生活中扮演了一个重要的角色,我们有必要花时间来讨论这一问题。要点如下。首先,……。 其次,……。 最后,……。
Considering that 主题词 play(s) an essential role in our life, it is necessary for us to spend time delving into the issue. The key points are as follows. To begin with, …. In addition, …. Last but not least, ….
关于……的一些好处/坏处可以被体现在如下几方面。首先,……。 其次,……。 最后,……。
Several benefits/ shortcomings concerning 主题词 can be embodied in the following aspects. To begin with, …. In addition, …. Last but not least, ….
【分论点】
1.通用(保底)
……会对……有利/有害
主题词 will be beneficial/ detrimental to ….
will be of great benefit/ detriment to …
……可以对……施加一个积极/消极的影响
主题词 can exert a positive/ negative impact on ….
……能够给……打下一个坚实的基础/ 造成一个潜在的威胁
主题词 may lay a solid foundation for …/ pose a potential threat to …
针对的对象:
academic study, career development, daily life, physical and mental health,
social/ economic development, personal development/ growth
the construction of a more harmonious society
2.常用
促进/阻碍……的(长期/可持续)发展
promote/ hinder the (long-term/ sustainable) development of …
(the society/ nation/ economy/ technology/ culture/ environment/ businesses/ individuals)
促进人际交流/阻碍面对面交流
promote interpersonal communication/ hinder face-to-face communication
改善人际关系/ 破坏人际关系
improve interpersonal relationship/ harm the relationship among people
给我们提供极大的方便
offer us great convenience (in many aspects of our daily life)
获取知识 acquire more knowledge
开拓视野 widen our view/ broaden our horizons
增强能力 strengthen one’s ability (of …)
丰富经历 enrich one’s life experiences
积累经验 accumulate working experience
适应环境 adapt to (social/ local/ new) environment
营造……氛围 create a better social atmosphere
提高效率 improve (study/ working) efficiency
利用资源 take advantage of resources
【展开】
1.因果展开
1)找原因
分论点句+because/ as/ since+原因(句子)
分论点句+because of/ due to/ owing to+原因(短语)
2)找结果
分论点句. So/ Therefore, 结果句.
分论点句, which +v.(三单)
, which makes sb do sth.
, which is beneficial/ detrimental to …
, which contributes to …(短语)
, which contributes to a fact that …(句子)
2.假设展开
如果……不做某事,……将不能发展得更好。
If we do not do sth, … will not develop better.
如果……缺乏某物,……将不能取得更大的成就/进步。
If we lack sth, … will not make greater achievements/ progress.
3.举例展开
例如,某人做了某事并且成功/失败,这就阐明了……。
For example, XXX, one of the most famous businessmen/ scientists, did sth and succeeded/ failed, which illustrates the importance/ harm of ….
…, one of my best friends, …
2018.6第三套
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the importance of building trust between businesses and consumers. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Several benefits concerning building trust between businesses and consumers can be embodied in the following aspects. To begin with, building trust between businesses and consumers can exert a positive impact on businesses. For example, Tencent, one of the most famous businesses, built trust with consumers and succeeded, which illustrates the importance of building trust of businesses and consumers. In addition, building trust between businesses and consumers will be of great benefit to consumers, which can make they trust businesses more. Last but not least, building trust can improve social atmosphere. So, building trust between businesses and consumers may lay a solid foundation for the construction of a more harmonious society.
对企业有一个积极的影响。例如,腾讯与消费者建立信任并且成功了,这就阐明了建立信任的重要性。
对消费者有利,这就使消费者更加信任企业。
建立信任能改善社会的氛围。所以给和谐(更好)社会的构建打下一个坚实的基础。
2019.12第一套
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of social responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Several benefits concerning having a sense of social responsibility can be embodied in the following aspects. To begin with, if we have a sense of social responsibility, we can help people who have some problems to solve their problems. In addition, we can also make the social full of love. For example, we can keep the air more cleaner and help some people who disable to do something they cannot do. Last but not least, people who have a sense of social responsibility can also improve the social’s development. They can become children’s example and help them also have a sense of social responsibility.
1.对生活有利。帮助他人。
If we have a sense of social responsibility, we can help people who have some problems to solve their problems.
2.让社会充满爱。
We can also make the social full of love. For example, we can keep the air more cleaner and help some people who disable to do something they cannot do.
3.给和谐(更好)社会的构建打下一个坚实的基础。
people who have a sense of social responsibility can also improve the social’s development. They can become children’s example and help them also have a sense of social responsibility.
1.对个人发展有一个积极的影响。如果我们没有社会责任,我们将不能取得更大的成就。
2.对生活有利,因为我们能够帮助人当他们面临困难的时候。
3.它可以营造良好的社会氛围。所以,这给和谐(更好)社会的构建打下一个坚实的基础。
2.措施论证
我们可以具体做什么来……?要点如下。首先,……。 其次,……。 最后,……。
What can we concretely do to …? The key points are as follows. To begin with, …. In addition, …. Last but not least, ….
三、结尾段(30-40字)
总结/ 个人观点+建议措施+预测展望
In a nutshell, (on the basis of what has been discussed above,) we may draw a conclusion that it is essential for us to …. Accordingly, we are supposed to (pay more attention to …). Only by this means can we embrace a brighter future.