英语大作文九步法

第一段 描述图画

第一步 开头段(开篇点题)

  1. The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that…(dramatic change of …)
  2. There is a growing national / global awareness / concern of …(主题词)
  3. Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon
  4. Recently, it often hits the headlines of the newspaper that…, which has aroused a heated discussion among the public
  5. These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is …

第二步 图画描述

  1. As is shown in the picture, / It is vividly shown in the picture that…
  2. 基本公式:地点+动作+核心事物,doing something(表示伴随状态),with + 非核心事物的名词(表周围环境和细节)
  3. 如果是两幅图片
    a. 找两图关系
    b. 对应关联词(but, yet,however)(on the contrary, by the contrast)(unfortunately) (similarly)
    c. 分别描述图画,用连接词连接几幅图片
  4. 如果有中文文字说明:解读题目,防止偏题,直译或者意译题目
    a. 直译:
    i. The caption reads,"…"
    ii. Just as the caption indicates,…
    iii. The subtitle reads/indicates,…
    b. 意译:对图画中文字说明的意思的抽象概括(找中心意思即可)
    i. We are informed that…
    ii. When reviewing the subtitle, one cannot help wondering…
    iii. Hence, the picture connotes a major theme of…(主题词) / that…(主题句子)

第三步 图画总结:承上启下

  1. Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning of it is as deep as the ocean.
  2. The implication is not only informative, but instructive as well.
  3. The author's real purpose is not the picture itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the picture
  4. What is depicted in the picture seems exaggerated, which has attracted extensive attention of the society

第二段 阐释意义

第四步 具体意义

  1. Undoubtedly / Without a doubt, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention should be paid to…(主题名词或者句子)
  2. Apparently, the drawing symbolically reveals a common social phenomenon in our daily life…
  3. The metaphorical and impressive picture has subtly revealed the relationship between… and …
  4. Actually, the author strives to send out an abundantly clear message that … is of (extreme detriment / supreme importance)
  5. It goes without saying that its symbolic message that / of… has gone beyond the picture itself.

第五步 意义阐释

  1. 第一种方法:定义和解释
    a. 下定义
    i. What is …? (… is that, … // the definition / meaning of …)
    b. 再解释:再说一遍
    i. …, In other words / namely,…
  2. 第二种方法:举例和调查(往往是一些正面的话题)
    a. Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed and experienced, the most impressive one is …(例子名字)
    b. 万能例子--Bolt
    i. International athletes such as Bolt …
  3. 第三种方法:原因和结果(往往是一些负面的话题)
    a. What exactly contributes to the dilemma of …? It's a thought-provoking question. To begin with,… In addition,…
    b. There seem to be more than one direct or indirect effect involved in …, which none of us can fail to notice. To begin with,… In addition,…
  4. 分析完负面原因或者描述完正面的例子,接下来写可能造成的结果:
    a. 效率话题 It can greatly enhance / reduce our work / study efficiency
    b. 发展话题 It contributes to / will hamper the (long-term / sustainable) development of the economy
    c. 环境话题
    i. (正面话题) … contributes to the improvement of the environment
    ii. (负面话题)Due to…, our environment will suffer a great destruction
    d. 健康话题
    i. (正面话题) … exerts a positive influence on our health both mentally and physically
    ii. (负面话题) … poses a great threat to our health both mentally and physically
    e. 生活便利话题
    i. (正面话题) It will offer us great convenience in many aspects in our daily life.
    ii. (负面话题) It will bring about tremendous inconvenience in many aspects of our daily life.
  5. 如果是遇到有争议的话题,就可以分情况讨论问题
    a. 引出争议
    i. When if comes to …, views might vary from person to person
    ii. In fact, there is no consensus of opinions among people over the issue of …
    b. 正方观点 On the one hand, some people hold the view that… To be specific, they claim that… For example,…
    c. 反方观点 On the other hand / Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view, arguing that…

第六步 意义总结

  1. 强调图片中的人
    a. How can we, not being that person, know the happiness / loneliness of her/him?
  2. 正面话题:
    a. Were there no such thing, never would we taste the happiness of life.
    b. Without …, how could it be possible for … to …
  3. 负面话题: Were the situation to continue, we would pay a heavy price

第三段 个人评论

第七步 评价归纳

  1. In view of every aspect of this (positive / negative) phenomenon, we should bear in mind that… (正面 / 负面 话题)
  2. (负面话题)The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took measures to solve the problem
  3. (中立话题)
    a. If used carelessly or without restraint, … could prove to be a double-edged sword.
    b. When considering opinions of both sides, I intend to believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages(利大于弊)
  4. 然后做一个总结
    a. On the basis of the factors mentioned above, we may draw a conclusion that…
    b. To…, in my opinion, it calls for the effect from all sides.

第八步 建议措施

  1. 首先提及,要扬长避短
    a. In terms of …, we should take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
    b. What we should do is to encourage the strengths and diminish the weaknesses.
  2. 然后给出具体措施
    a. 对于社会和国家
    i. We must promote and popularize … among the public from every detail in our daily life.
    ii. The government has the responsibility to educate every citizen to do … and prohibit factories / people from doing …
    iii. Laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to do …
    b. 对于个人
    i. As for ourselves, we ought to take practical actions to do something.
    ii. The cultivation of … depends on the active participation of every citizen of our society

第九步 憧憬未来

  1. 负面话题
    a. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future
    b. If all the solution are put into practice, the prospect will become more desirable
  2. 正面话题
    a. Looking further ahead, we can say with full confidence / certainty that it is reasonable for us to expect a saner society
    b. I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we can do …
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