第一段
写作思路:
【1】描述图片:这幅图的背景,是劳作的现场,一群员工肩负原木,极力迈向不同的目标,汗如雨下;然而,由于两组员工目标截然相反,所以他们很难取得进展。
【2】标题收尾:图画的标题写道:“齐心方可协力。”
简约句式:
【1】The picture sets its background in 场景概述. 图中具体情节.
【2】The caption of the cartoon reads, "通过图片标题,引向文章主题"
必备词汇:
lumber 原木 march 大步走,迈向
destination 目的地,目标 sweat 汗
opposite 相反的
read(标牌、纸张、书上)写道……
joint efforts 联合,协作,共同努力
写作范例:
The picture sets its background in a labor scene. Carrying the lumber, the workers are trying to march toward their destinations, sweat running down like raindrops. However, they can hardly move forward because the two entirely separate groups of them are pulling toward opposite directions. The caption of the cartoon reads, "The common destination is the basis of joint efforts."
第二段
写作思路:
【1】点明寓意:这幅图片的意义显而易见,它旨在强调团体内齐心协力的重要性,这种品质对个人和集体而言,都是不可或缺的。
【2】个人角度:一方面,虽然集体的每个成员都具备独立工作的能力,也有自己的专长,但只有通过通力合作,才能使自身的劳动价值实现最大化——优化自己的专长,弥补自己的缺陷。
【3】集体角度:另一方面,只有成员齐心协力时,组织才会有不断的突破。
【4】杜撰名言:正如一位智者所言,”团结起来,我们如有神力;瓦解之后,我们弱似毫发。
凶悍句式:
【1】Apparently, the drawing aims to emphasize the importance of 主题词,即图片所体现的品质 within any group, a quality essential to both individuals and organizations.
【2】For one thing, (从个人角度论证)although every member of an organization or group is capable of 兼顾反向情况, only by 重申主题价值 can he maximize 主题所带来的收益 — 具体的收益.
【3】For another,(从集体角度论证) an organization can only make constant breakthroughs when its members 主题信息.
【4】Just as a wise man once put, "用谚语或俗语总结主题 "
必备词汇:
apparently 显而易见 unity 团结
essential 必要的,首要的
independently 独立地,各自地
limitation 局限,限制
concerted effort 协作,共同努力
写作范例
Apparently, the drawing aims to emphasize the importance of unity within any group, a quality essential to both individuals and organizations. For one thing, although every member of an organization or group is capable of working independently and has his own specialty, only by joint efforts can he maximize the value of his labor — optimizing what he is proficient in, and having others make up his limitations. For another, an organization can only make constant breakthroughs when its members make concerted effort. Just as a wise man once put, "United, we may be as strong as Hercules; divided, as weak as 'Her curl'. "
注:Hercules,海格力斯,希腊神话中的大力神,宙斯之子。此处将Hercules与Her curl(女性的卷发)置于同一句中,形成戏谑的对照。
第三段
写作思路:
【1】作者态度:基于以上的分析,我们可以得出结论,相互合作至关重要,可以让一个人、一个团体或一个国家立于不败之地。
【2】具体建议:因此,在努力进取的过程中我们要和自己的伙伴紧密合作,和谐共存。
【3】重申建议:换句话说,在各个领域,我们都要与合作伙伴创建共赢的局面。
【4】谚语收尾:一言以蔽之,团结就是力量。
有力句式:
【1】On the basis of the analysis above, we may come to the conclusion that 主题词 plays a decisive role in the ultimate success of a person, a team, and even a nation.
【2】Therefore, we should 具体建议.
【3】In other words, it is advisable to 重申建议.
【4】As the proverb goes, 结论.
必备词汇:
analysis 分析 ultimate 最终的,终极的
harmoniously 和谐地
精品范文:
On the basis of the analysis above, we may come to the conclusion that unity plays a decisive role in the ultimate success of a person, a team, and even a nation. Therefore, we should associate ourselves harmoniously with our companions in every attempt towards our goals. In other words, it is advisable to achieve a win-win situation with partners in various fields. As the proverb goes, unity is strength.
词句素材
【基调】a sarcastic scene(讽刺的一幕);
【情节】excavating the resources(挖掘资源);carriage(车); bear the weight(承载负荷);mining(开采);
【结果】trap(围困)
习作范例
This cartoon presents us a sarcastic scene: a man, concentrating on excavating the resources from the earth, doesn’t care about whether his carriage can bear the weight or whether the way of mining is reasonable. As a result, he’s trapped by what he has done.
第二段
写作思路
【点题】我们近几十年来是怎样掠夺自然资源的,难道这幅图不像一面镜子,把我们的所作所为一览无余的反映出来了吗?
【正面】一方面,这些年来经济在飞速增长。
【反面】另一方面,我们近些年来过度强调经济增长,已经过度开发了自然资源,却没有考虑到这种做法的副作用。
【结论】我们的确获得了短期收益,但我们有没有考虑到,有朝一日,我们的后代会生活在一个各种资源短缺的世界里?
词句素材
【点题】mirror(镜子);in the past decades(近几十年);
【正面】a speedy economic growth(经济飞速增长).
【反面】laying too much emphasis on(过度强调);over-exploited(过度开发);taken … into consideration(考虑到);adverse effect(反作用,反效应,副作用)
【结论】short-term benefit(短期利益);descendants(后代);in the coming decades(未来,有朝一日)
习作范例
Isn’t this cartoon a mirror of what we have done with the natural resources in the past decades? On the one hand, these years have witnessed a speedy economic growth. On the other hand, laying too much emphasis on the growth of economy, we have over-exploited resources and taken no adverse effects into consideration. We have obtained short-term benefit, but we have not taken into consideration our descendants who have to live in world short of resources in the coming decades.
第三段
写作思路
【态度】我们亟需采取行动戒绝这种行为!
【路线】但这决不是让我们禁用资源,而是要通过一种更为合理的方式利用资源。
【方法】产业结构调整是一个关键性的举措。
【方法】同时,提升能效同等重要,这依赖于节能技术的发展。
词句素材
【态度】delinquency(陋习,不良行为);cannot be waited anymore(亟待解决);
【路线】by no means(绝非;决不是);in a more reasonable way(通过一种更合理的方式);
【方法】The adjustment of the industrial structure(产业结构调整); a crucial step(关键性举措);energy efficiency(能效);energy-saving technology(节能技术)
习作范例
Taking action to end this delinquency cannot be waited anymore! But it is by no means of stopping the use of resources, but in a more reasonable way. The adjustment of the industrial structure is a crucial step. Meanwhile, the increase of energy efficiency is equally important, and this, of course, depends on the advance of energy-saving technology.