Modify My Speech

Jack and Luke had given me a lot of valuable suggestions about my speech. I wrote a long story and I have not express a strong idea! So I have to improve my speeches, and make it more meaningful.
I aim to persuade the audiences that plz dont judge anyone or anything at the first sight or the first sound. Especially to children, It may hurt him for several years. Children are weak, and they can't obey the rules well. Our responsbilities were not to frightened them, and unload children's metal burden.