造句基础

1. 在北京，没有钱的年轻人以这种方式也能实现他们心中的梦想。
   In Beijing, the young without money in this way can realize dreams in their hearts.

2. 这给世界上那些希望加快发展的国家和民族提供了全新的选择。

   It offers a new option for those counties and nations who want to speed up their development in the world.

   It provides those counties and nations who want to speed up their development with a new option.

   • offer sth. 提供某物
   • provide sb with sth 给某人提供某物
   • want to do sth 想要做某事
   • Speed up sth 加速某事

3. 花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。

   Spending/Costing too much time on the Internet has a negative impact on one's physical and mental health.

   错误：<u>Spent</u> too <u>many</u> time <u>surf</u> the internet <u>have</u> a negative impact on one’s physical and mental health.

   • Spend time doing sth

     用 Do 必死！改为 Spending

     surf 改为 surfing，最好用 on 替代，

   • 无法确定用 have 还是 has 的时候，用 may have，情态动词+动词原形

   • time 不可数，用 much time

• 对···有影响：

  have an effect on sth/ exert an impact on sth

• 对某事有益：

  have a beneficial effect on sth

• 对某事有负面的影响

  have a negative influence on sth

• 对某事有重要的影响

  have an important / vital effect on sth

• 对某事有害

  have a harmful effect on sth

• 对某事有不利的影响

  have a detrimental impact on sth

4. 经常锻炼对一个人的身心健康有益处。

   Regular exercise may have a beneficial effect on one's physical and mental health.

5. 增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。
   Increasing the investment on high education has a positive influence on the development of country.

   • 产生积极的影响
     have a positive influence on sth

   • 增加高等教育的投资

     increase the investment on high education

   • 国家的发展

     one nation’s development | the development of one country
     当分不清用 a 还是 an 的时候，用 one 代替

6. 世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的影响。

   错：The research from the World Bank shows that <u>increase</u> the investment on high education can have a positive influence on one nation’s GDP.

   1. increase 改成 increasing | Do 必死
   2. 实力不足，少用从句 that 等，多用介词

   According to the research from the World Bank, increasing the investment on high education can have a positive influence on one nation's GDP.

7. 这给世界上那些希望加快发展又希望保持自身独立性的国家和民族提供了全新的选择。

   It offers a new option for those countries and nations who want to speed up their development while preserving their independence. | ~and keep their own independence.

   • While 与此同时
   • 保留他们的独立性
     Perseve their independence/ keep their own independence.

8. 移动电话给我们的生活产生了深远的影响。

   • 产生深远的影响
     have/ exert a profound influence on sth
     affect sth profoundly
   • 我们的日常生活
     our daily life
   • 区别：everyday 和 every day
     前者是形容词；后者是 n+adv .

   错：Mobile phones have exert profound impact on our daily life.

   1. have exert 错误 | do do 必死，一句话有且仅有一个谓语动词，并列和从句除外；
      改成 have exerted | have done 现在完成时
   2. profound impact on sth 改成 a profound impact on sth

   正：mobile phones have exerted a profound impact on our daily life.
   mobile phones have had a profound impact on our daily life.

9. 也可以这么说，智能手机对我们这一代人影响最大，它已经渗透到我们日常生活中。

   • 也可以这么说
     It could also be argued that
   • 我们这一代人
     our generation
   • 已经渗透到我们日常生活中
     have already infiltrated into our everyday life
     十岁原则：避免生词难句，写正确是第一要务
     have already been a necessary part of our everyday life

   错：It could also be argued that the smart phones may have the largest impact on our generation, it has already been a necessary part of our everyday life.

   1. 逗号不能够连接两个句子。 do do 必死！！！
      类似的：英语中，没有《》
      英语中，书名，杂志名等，都用斜体！！ 但是，手写的考试中，加引号！

      推荐电影：要写成足够简单 “2012”、 “Harry Potter”

   2. it 错误，不能够指代前面的 smart phones，不确定指的是手机还是整个句子
      it 改成 they, 不能改成 which，因为非限定定语从句指代句子还是phone 指代不明

   正：It could also be argued that the smart phone may have the largest impact on our generation, and they have already been a necessary part of our everyday life.

10. 如果这些传统艺术失传，肯定会给中国的经济带来负面影响。

    • 从句必有句，从句必有主句！
      结构： if sv, sv.

    错：If these traditional arts lost, must have a negative influence on China’s economy.

    • 从句必有句，从句必有主句。

      If these traditional arts lost, <u>they</u> must have a negative influence on China’s economy.

    • 是这件事情，给中国的经济带来负面影响。不是 traditional arts，所以不能使用 they。
      <u>If</u> these traditional arts lost, <u>which</u> must have a negative influence on China’s economy.

    • 都是从句，这句话没有主句了！

      If these traditional arts <u>are</u> lost, it must have a negative influence on China’s economy.

    • 虚拟语气，传统现在还没有消失，与现在不符，要用虚拟语气

      If these traditional arts were lost, <u>and</u> it may have a negative impact on China’s economy.

    • and 并列：结构相似，意义相关，主句跟从句不能并列

    正：If these traditional arts were lost, and it must have a negative influence on China’s economy.

11. 但事实是，这些东西对我们在事业上的成功几乎没有持久的影响。相反，每天都乐观面对棘手的事情，是一种提升幸福感的更好的方法。

    • 事实是 the reality is that sv.
    • 几乎没有持久的影响 have little lasting impact on sth
    • 我们事业上的成功 our success in the workplace
    • 相反 instead
    • 每天都乐观 being optimistic / being positive every day
    • 棘手的事情 tough matters
    • 提升幸福感 improve wellbeing

    But the reality is that these things have little lasting impact on our seccess in the workplace. Instead, being optimistic for tough matters every day is a much better way to improve wellbeing.

12. 我们应该意识到的是，诸如金钱之类的东西对我们的生活的成功几乎没有任何持久的影响。 相反，真正起作用的是乐观面对所有遇见的事情。

    • 我们应该意识到的是 what we are supposed to realize

    • 遇见的事情 things encountered

• 形式主语 | 某事是怎样的

  it is adj for sb to do sth 某人做某事是怎么样的

  it is adj to do sth 做某事是怎么样的

  it is adj that sv 某事是怎样的

13. 现如今，老师经常抱怨，学生对同学冷漠。

    • 学生对同学冷漠 students are insensitive to classmate
      indifference | indifferent

    错：It is often for teachers to complain that students are insensitive to classmates.

    1. often 是副词，不是形容词

    正：Nowadays, it is common for teachers to complain that students are insensitive to classmates.
    Nowadays, it is bitterly common to see the reality that teachers often complain that their students are insensitive to classmates.

    • bitterly 苦涩地，悲伤地

    错：It is complain by teachers that students are insensitive to classmates.

    • is complain 错误，改成 is complained | be do 必死！！
      be doing 现在进行
      be done 现在被动

    错：I am write this letter for the purpose of apply for the position.

    1. am write | 改成 am writing | be do 必死
    2. of apply 错误，改成 of applying | of do 必死。
       介词后面不能跟动词原形，必须是动词 ing 形式。其中 of 代表所有的介词。

五大必死错误：

1. of do 必死 | 介词后面不能跟动词原形
2. be do 必死 | be doing 和 be done
3. Do 必死 | 陈述句句首，不能使用动词原形做主语
4. do do 必死 | 一句话有且仅有一个谓语动词，并列和从句除外
5. will doing 必死 | will + do; can + do

14. 来自不同文化背景的人彼此很难交流。

    • 某人做某事是困难的
      it is difficult for sb to do sth.

    • 人 people, individual, person
      a people 一个民族

    • 彼此交流 communicate with each other

    • 来自不同文化背景的人

      People from different cultural backgrounds

    It is difficult for people from different cultural backgrounds to communicate with each other.

常见的建议功能：

1. It is necessary for sb to do sth 某人做某事是必要的
   It is advisable for sb to do sth 某人做某事是明智的

   It is imperative for sb to do sth 某人做某事是非常必要的 | 紧急的

2. 某人应该做某事
   sb should do sth
   sb is supposed to do sth 相比 should ，更加礼貌的建议

3. 如果某人能够做某事，这将是极好的
   if sb can do sth, it would be much better.

4. Sb:

   • The government / the authority / the public / the students / the residents
   • 有关部门 the department concerned
   • 有关人士 the people concerned

5. Do:

   • Enact relative laws and regulations 制定相关法律规则
   • If the public can be made aware the importance of xxx, it would be much better.
   • I would like to emphasize: without ironclad implementation, any better suggestion would just be nothing but empty promise.

6. 政府采取有效且积极的措施来解决这个迫在眉睫的问题是十分有必要的。

   • 政府采取措施是必要的
     It is necessary for the government to take measures.

   • Take measures / take steps / introduce approaches / take actions

   • 有效且积极的措施 effective and proactive measures

   • 十分有必要的 rather necessary

   • 来解决问题 to address the issue / to tackle the issue / to deal with the issue

   • 迫在眉睫的问题 the impending issue / problem

   It is rather necessay for the government to take effective and proactive measures so as to address this impending issue.

   • So as to do sth = to do sth = in the hope of doing sth

   It is advisable for the government to address the impending issue by introducing effective and proactive measures.

   • 政府解决问题是有必要的

     错：It is advisable that the government addresses the issue.

   • 表建议应该用虚拟语气
     It is advisable that the government address the issue.
     It is advisable that the government should address the issue.

   • It is advisable for the government to address the issue.

7. 我认为，政府应该采取有效且积极的措施来应对图片中所描述的这个问题是十分有必要的。

   • 我认为 in my opinion / from my perspective

   • 图片中所描述的这个问题 the issue / phenomenon depicted / portrayed in the picture

In my opition, it is rather necessary for the government to take effective and proactive measures in the hope of addressing the issue portrayed in the picture.

17. 必须具备良好的语言表达能力。

    • 做某事是重要的
      It is essential to do sth
    • 良好的语言表达能力
      have a good command of languages

    It is essential to have a good command of languages.

18. 对大学生来说，权衡每门课的优缺点才是明智的。

    • 权衡 weigh
    • 优缺点 the merits and demerits / advantages and disadvantages
    • 大学生 students / undergraduates / college students

    It is only sensible for university students to weigh the merits against demerits of each course.

19. 显然，在手机上的严肃阅读变得普遍，这种现象，既令人鼓舞，又令人担忧。

    • 严肃阅读 serious reading
    • 既令人鼓舞，有令人担忧 both encouraging and worrying

    it is evident that serious reading on the phone has become prevalent, a phenomenon that is both encouraging and worrying.

20. 但是，应该明白的是，如果抱着习惯是难以改变的态度否定 xxx 的重要性的话，这是不可取的，因为任何进步都是与固有习惯斗争的结果。

    • 应该明确的是 what must be clear | 名词性从句
    • 某事是不可取的 it is not advisable / necessary
    • 如果 if / on the grounds that
    • 抱着习惯是难以改变的态度 it is difficult to change the habit
    • 固有习惯 inherent habits

    However, what should be clear is that it is not advisable to neglect the significance of reading/ persistence/ cooperation on the ground that it is difficult to change habits, because any progress must fight the inherent habits.

21. 仅仅因为经济能力或社会地位，就阻碍任何学生接受教育是不道德的。

    • 做某事是不道德的 it is immoral to do sth
    • 阻碍任何学生接受教育 stop students from receiving education/ thwart students' access to education
      Stop sb from doing sth
      Have access to education 接受教育
      Have access to the library 有权进入图书馆
    • 因为
      because + 句子
      because of + 名词短语

    Just because of financial background or social status, it is immoral to thwart any student's access to education.

22. 想要一夜之间就解决能源问题是不可能的。

    It is impossible to solve the energy problems overnight.

23. 想要一夜之间就解决图片中所描述的问题是不可能的，不幸的是，该问题已经给我们的日常生活带来了严重的影响。

    It would be impossible to address the issue portrayed in the picture overnight, and unfortunately, it has already had a crippling impact on our daliy life.

24. 这是一幅具有讽刺意味的漫画，用幽默夸张的表达方式，向我们展示了当下社会的一个普遍现象。
    There is a very ironic cartoon that uses humorous and exaggerated expressions to show us a common phenomenon in the current society.

25. 有充分的证据表明，汽车对我们的环境有害。

    There is abundant evidence that cars have a harmful effect on the environment.

26. 肯定的是，越来越多的证据表明，空气污染通过以前我们不知道的方式影响我们的身体。
    Certainly, there is increasing evidence that air pollution affects our body in ways that we didn't know.

    • 不远的将来，该数字会有一个急剧的增长
      There will be a sharp increase with regard to the number in the near future.
    • xxx 的数据，过去曾有一个适度的下降
      There was a moderate decrease in the number of xxx.

27. 当然，如果只是表面上看，这张图片是完全没有道理的。但是如果我们仔细思考就会发现，确实有必要对其进行分析。

    • 如果仅从表面上看 if we just cast a glance at it | if we just glance at it
    • 这张图是完全没有道理的 there are invalid concerns
    • 如果我们仔细思考 if we made a thorough consideration | had we made a thorough consideration (虚拟语气)
    • 我们就会发现 we may realize that
    • 确实有必要进行分析 further analysis about it is necessary | further analysis about it would be on the point
    • 虚拟语气 had we made a thorough consideration

    Certainly, there are invalid concerns about the picture itself if we just cast a glance at it, but had we made a thorough consideration, we may realize analysis about the drawing would be on the point.

28. 让某人做某事 | 使得某人做某事（分析原因）

    enable sb to do sth | encourage sb to do sth | allow sb to do sth | promote sb to do sth | let sb do sth | help sb to do sth

29. 出国旅游能够让人们加深对海外文化的了解。

    • 出国旅游 travel abroad | travel overseas
      加深对某事的理解 understand sth better | deepen one's understanding of sth

    Travelling overseas may enable people to deepen their understanding of foreign culture.

30. 据说去国外学习能够极大提高学生的英语能力。

    • 据说 it is said that
    • 提升学生的英语能力 advance students' English ability | improve students' English ability

    It is said that studying abroad may enable students to advance their English ability.

31. 总之，乐观能够使人们形式睿智、仁慈、自信，它也是个人性格和能力培养中，不可缺少的部分。

    • 据说 in conclusion | in short
    • 乐观能够使人们形式睿智、仁慈、自信 being optimistic enables people to behave wisely, kindly, and confidently
    • 是个人发展不可取少的一部分 it is crucial for any individual's development
    • 个人性格和能力 in terms of both character and competence

    In conclusion, being optimistic enables people to behave wisely, kindly, and confidently, and it is also crucial for any individual's development, in terms of both character and competence.