Keywords: 快递
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据报道，今年中国快递服务(courier services)将递送大约120亿件包裹。这将使中国有可能超越美国成为世界上最大的快递市场。
It's reported that China courier services will deliver about 12 billion packages this year, which will probably make China overtake America as the biggest courier market in the world.
It is reported that courier services in China will deliver around 12 billion parcels this year, which will make China possibly surpass the USA as world's largest market of courier services.
据报道：it is reported that ...
递送包裹：deliver parcels
包裹：parcel
这…：非限制性定语从句
大多数包裹里装着网上订购的物品。
Most packages are filled with goods bought online.
Most of the parcels are for items ordered online.
装着…的物品：are for items ... ，更符合英语表达习惯，之后再找找类似的吧
订购：order比buy好？
中国给数百万在线零售商以极具竞争力的价格销售商品的机会。
China gives opportunities to millions of sellers to sale products at a 具竞争力的 price.
China is providing millions of online retailers with opportunities of selling their goods at extremely competitive prices.
给…以…->为…提供…：provide ... for ...
极具竞争力的：extremely competitive
价格：price，可数
在线零售商：online retailer
仅在11月11日，中国消费者就从国内最大的购物平台购买了价值90亿美元的商品。
Only on November 11, consumers in China bought products of 9 billion dollars on the largest 购物平台.
Only on the single day of November 11, did Chinese consumers buy $ 9 billion worth of goods from the biggest domestic shopping platform.
domestic：国产的，国内的 我刚背哒！
购物平台：shopping platform
在11月11日：on the single day of November 11
价值90亿美元的：$ 9 billion worth of
逐字翻译的时候注意倒装
中国有不少这样的特殊购物日。因此，快递业在中国扩展就不足为奇了。
There are so many such special buying day that it's no doubt the courier services spread in China.
There are quite a few of such special shopping days in China. Therefore, it is no wonder that courier services are expanding in China.
购物日：shopping day
扩展：expand
…不足为奇：it is no wonder that ... , it is not surprising that ...
