On Writing Well 16

Chapter16 Business Writing

writing in your job

1.conducive[kən'dju:.sɪv]

Children , and staff, must work in an atmosphere that is conducive to learning.

providing the right conditions for something good to happen or exist 有利的,有助的,有益的

例:Such a noisy environment was not conducive to a good night's sleep.

仿:A good school has conducive atmosphere  for studying.

2.vanish without trace

消失得无影无

The thief ran quickly and vanished without trace.

3.crutch

I told them not to use the special vocabulary of education as a crutch, almost any subject can be made accessible in good English.

1.a stick with a piece that fits under the arm, which you lean on for support if you have difficulty in walking because of a foot or leg injury (腿脚受伤的人使用的)T形拐杖

something that provides help and support and which you depend on, often too much (常指过度的)依靠,支撑,支柱only singular often disapproving

例:As an atheist, he believes that religion is just an emotional crutch for the insecure.作为一个无神论者,他认为宗教不过是缺乏信心的人的精神支柱。

仿:There are a group of young adult  don't go to work and their parents are the clutch for their life.

4.accessible

easy to obtain or use

搭配accessible to      easily/readily accessible

例:Computers should be made readily accessible to teachers and pupils.

仿:The new technology should be easily accessible to the public.

4.glimmer

Finally, at the end, we get a glimmer of humanity.

SIGN 迹象a slight sign of something good or positive 微弱的(好)迹象;一丝,一线

例:•This month's sales figures offer a glimmer of hope for the depressed economy.

仿:She's never shown a glimmer of interest in jogging.

5.pomposity

Information can be imparted clearly and without pomposity

Pomposity means speaking or behaving in a very serious manner which shows that you think you are more important than you really are.名词自负;自命不凡

例:He hated pomposity and disliked being called a genius.

仿:Being pomposity is hard to make any progress.

Summary

be yourself when you write

write human sentences

Four articles of faith:clarity, simplicity, brevity, humanity

use:active verbs, first person I

avoid:concept nouns, long words

Reflections

今天书中这个例子很好的解释了什么叫说人话,改之前的句子就算每个词都认识可是就算重复读几遍仍然不知所云。


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要做到说人话,就是按你平常说话的思考方式去写东西就好。多用主动词,第一人称,少用专用名词和晦涩的长名词。

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