2025年9月13日雅思小作文(地图)

The plans below show the layout of a village park 10 years ago and the same park today.

英文范文

The two maps illustrate the transformation of a village park over the past decade.

In the past, the park had a relatively simple layout. Near the entrance in the north, there was a car park and two tennis courts. Adjacent to them to the south was a football pitch, with a children's play area to the east of the football pitch. At the southern end of the park, there were a pond and woods.

Currently, the park has undergone significant changes. The number of tennis courts has doubled to four, still located in the northern part. The car park has been expanded in the north to accommodate 50 cars. A children's soft play area has been added to the east, and additional toilets are situated nearby. Moreover, a picnic area has been set up in the south-west, a boating lake to the east of the picnic area, and a cafe to the north-east of the boating lake. A cycle path now runs around the perimeter of the park.

Overall, the park has been greatly upgraded to offer more diverse recreational facilities.

中文译文

这两张地图展示了过去十年中一个乡村公园的变迁。

过去,公园的布局相对简单。在北部的入口附近,有一个停车场和两个网球场。在它们南边相邻的位置是一个足球场,足球场的东边有一个儿童游乐区。在公园的南端,有一个池塘和一片树林。

目前,公园发生了重大变化。网球场的数量翻倍至四个,仍然位于北部。北部的停车场已扩建,可容纳50辆汽车。东部新增了一个儿童软游乐区,附近的区域设置了额外的厕所。此外,西南部设置了一个野餐区,野餐区的东边有一个划船湖,划船湖的东北方向有一个咖啡馆。现在一条自行车道环绕公园周边。

总体而言,公园进行了大幅升级,以提供更多样化的娱乐设施。

高分雅思词汇

  1. illustrate:说明,阐明

  2. transformation:转变,变化

  3. relatively:相对地

  4. layout:布局

  5. adjacent to:紧邻,靠近

  6. undergo:经历,经受(文中用“undergone”,过去分词形式)

  7. double:(使)翻倍

  8. expand:扩建,扩大

  9. accommodate:容纳

  10. incorporate:包含,并入

  11. perimeter:周边,周长

  12. diverse:多样的

  13. recreational facilities:娱乐设施

被动句使用

  1. The number of tennis courts has doubled to four.(网球场的数量被翻倍至四个,这里“has doubled”虽不是传统被动形式,但强调数量的变化结果,有被动意味)

  2. The car park has been expanded to accommodate 50 cars.(停车场已被扩建以容纳50辆汽车)

  3. A children's soft play area and additional toilets have been added.(一个儿童软游乐区和额外的厕所已被添加)

  4. A picnic area, a boating lake, and a cafe have been incorporated.(一个野餐区、一个划船湖和一个咖啡馆已被并入)

  5. A cycle path now runs around the perimeter of the park.(一条自行车道现在被设置环绕公园周边,这里“runs”虽不是被动语态,但从表达效果上,强调了自行车道的存在状态是被规划环绕公园,有类似被动效果,若严格用被动句可改为“A cycle path has now been built around the perimeter of the park.” )

雅思核心词汇(按词性分类)

名词

  • Transformation(转变)

  • Entrance(入口)

  • Pitch(场地,如足球场)

  • Play area(游乐区)

  • Pond(池塘)

  • Woods(树林)

  • Perimeter(外围)

  • Facilities(设施)

  • Recreational offerings(娱乐设施)

动词

  • Illustrate(展示)

  • Feature(设有)

  • Undergo(经历)

  • Accommodate(容纳)

  • Introduce(引入)

  • Incorporate(纳入)

  • Highlight(突出)

形容词/副词

  • Significant(显著的)

  • Adjacent(邻近的)

  • Enhanced(增强的)

  • Currently(目前)

  • Furthermore(此外)

其他高频表达

  • Doubled(翻倍)

  • Soft play area(软质游乐区)

  • Picnic area(野餐区)

  • Boating lake(划船湖)

  • Cycle path(自行车道)

注:词汇选择基于地图描述常见表达,部分词汇参考了雅思写作官方评分标准中的高分用词。

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