英语写作三部分

第一部分

1.owe/attribute A to B 将A归因B

Many people owe their success not to formal schooling but to self-education.

很多人并不将他们的成功归结于正式教育。

2.dedicate/devote oneself to 致力于…

I think it is very noble for him to dedicate himself to public service.

我觉得他将自己投身于公共服务这件事非常地高尚。

3.stem/result from … 源于…

The pressure of finding a job among college students stems largely from the population explosion.

大学生寻找工作的压力很大程度上来源于人口膨胀。

4.lead to/result in/give rise to 导致…

Technological advances can lead to more efficient uses of natural resources and sustain economic growth.

科技的发展可以使我们更有效率地使用自然资源以及维持经济增长。

5.in terms of … 在某一方面…

Tourism is becoming a global industry, an industry which ranks second to none in terms of size and global influence.

旅游业已经成为一个世界产业,一个就规模和全球影响而言都独一无二的产业。

6.take … into consideration 把…考虑在内

Governments should take into consideration enormous challenges and opportunities presented by global aging when making decisions.

政府在做决策的时候,需要考虑到全球老龄化所带来的巨大机遇和挑战。

7.tend to/be likely to/be inclined to … 倾向于…

A sweet smile tends to avoid the conflict, iron out the discrimination and shorten the distance between people.

笑容能规避冲突,消除分歧,缩短人和人之间的距离。

第二部分:经典背景句

这些句子一般用在引出主题或者观点前,加上背景。

比如:人民生活水平显著提高,因此网络越来越重要。

网络越来越普及(The Internet has played an increasingly important role.)是观点或者主题,前面可以加上背景,比如随着改革开放,人民的生活水平有显著提高(With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, people’s living standard has been very much improved. )

连在一起:

With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, people’s living standard has been very much improved. The Internet has played an increasingly important role in our society.

1. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, people’s living standard has been very much improved.

随着改革开放,人民的生活水平有显著提高。

2. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce.

随着经济和社会的发展,竞争越来越激烈。

3. It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Attitude is the key point to take the first step.

众所周知,我们生活在一个存在很多困难的动态的世界里,我们只能面对他们。态度是迈出第一步的关键点。

4. Smartphones have penetrated every aspect of daily life.

智能手机已经渗透入日常生活的方方面面。

5. With the accelerated pace of contemporary life, people’s work and life are increasingly stressful.

随着当代生活的节奏加快,人们的工作和生活压力越来越大。

6. Resource exhaustion, environment degradation, and aging population constitute the three major national issues confronting human beings.

资源耗尽,环境恶化,和老龄化人口组成了人类面临的三大问题。

7. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having right values in life is very important for us, especially youngsters.

生活的10%在于你如何创造它,90%在于你如何接受它,生活的价值不在于天的长度,而在于我们的利用,因此具有正确的价值观非常重要,尤其对于年轻人。

第三部分:六脉神剑(起承转合独评)

我把六脉神剑总结为四个问题,更便于阅读。

1. “两点”怎么表述?

Firstly, … Secondly, …

To begin with, … Furthermore, …

On the one hand, … On the other, …

In the first place, … Besides, …

2.“顺接”和“转接”怎么表述

顺接:

as a result / as a consequence / consequently / thus / hence / therefore

转接

however / nevertheless / nonetheless

3.“总结”怎么表述

总结

in conclusion, all in all, in a word

简而言之

in short, in brief, to sum up

如前所述

as has been mentioned above

given the factors I have just outlined

4.“个人观点”怎么表述

in my eyes

as for me

from my perspective

as far as I am concerned

To my knowledge

From my level of understanding

附赠六脉神剑完整版:

启部:用于引导第一点

首先:1. first, firstly, first of all; 2. to begin with, to start with; 3. in the first place, first and foremost

一方面:1. on the one hand (on the other); 2. for one thing (for another thing).

承部:承接前面观点

其次 --- second, secondly, third, thirdly

进一步 --- furthermore, what’s more, moreover

此外 --- besides, in addition

结果--- consequently, as a consequence/result, thus hence therefore, on this account, in light of this

转部:转折语义相反

技巧1:but改although/in spite of/despite

如:Selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students’ study, but it also cause a number of problems.

Although selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students’ study, it also causes a number of problems.

In spite of/despite its great benefits for students’ study, selecting their favorite lecturer does cause a number of problems.

注:很多老师建议but改成in spite of the fact that. 那么那些老师有兴趣去看看GMAT语法,这种写法叫wordy或者redundancy(冗长,累赘)。但是如果改成in spite of this,那还可以。不过前面需要句话句掉。

技巧2:but改yet/while/whereas

如:Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, but others adopt a completely different view.

Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, while others adopt a completely different view.

此外还可以用:

不幸地:sadly unfortunately

相反地:on the contrary, by contrast, conversely

事实上:as a matter of fact, in fact

然而:nevertheless, nonetheless

合部:小结上文中段落的内容

总结:in conclusion, all in all, in a word

简而言之:in short, in brief, to sum up

如前所述:as has been noted / mentioned above

given the factors I have just outlined

taking into account all the above factors (后面主语用I)

独部:个人观点标志词

personally speaking可以用in my eyes, as for me, as I see it

in my opinion可以用from my perspective

from my point of view可以用as far as I am concerned

it seems to me that可以用from where I stand, my stance is that …

评部:在观点前可以加一些副词来评价

Interestingly, surprisingly, more importantly

Especially, particularly

Undoubtedly, apparently, evidently, obviously, conceivably等

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