writing 9

班级:L3-A 姓名: Hannah 学号:20193000318

日期:2020.6.9 作业序号:009

Write your own paragraph about the graph below. The graph shows the percentage of people in different age groups who say they cannot live without their television. Follow the two models in this unit and focus carefully on the grammar points that you have practiced. Try to include some of the vocabulary words as well.

正文:

The bar chart demonstrates the number of people who unable to leave their television in diverse groups. It is clear that the proportion of people who can't live without television increases with age. We can see the age group least likely to leave TV watching was those over 62, accounting for 44 per cent. By the contrary, the population of 18-26 age group was fairly low and was about 17 per cent. Following by the proportion of people in the 27-40 age group who are unable lives without watching television reached 25 per cent, which had an increase of 10 per cent over the previous group. In addition, there was not much difference between the 41-50 age group and the 51-61 age group, their figures were 32 per cent and 36 per cent, respectively. and only about 4 per cent difference in the middle.

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