You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to
school.
你应该以对图片的简要描述开始你的文章，然后评论孩子对去学校的理解学校
“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”
“如果我的手机已经知道了一切，为什么我还要去上学？”

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写作提纲

• 一、提出观点:
  手机在学习中虽然重要但并非必不可少

play an important but not indispensable role

• 二、论证观点：
  1、学生自身应具有很好的知识储备

have a good command of

2、我们的个人知识促进了手机的发展

personal knowledge

• 三、总结观点：
  l、过度依赖手机弊大于利

over-dependence on phones does more harm than good

2、要平衡好手机与知识学习的关系

balance the relationship between phones and study

范文

                   The Role of Phones in Study
                         手机在学习中的作用

What the drawing vividly depicts is that a pupil asks his mother why he is going to school since his phone already knows everything.
漫画生动地描述了一个小学生问他的母亲，既然他的手机已经无所不知，为什么还要去上学。
The picture illustrates that some students are highly dependent on their phones, overlooking the importance of personal study.
这幅漫画揭示了这样一个现象:一些学生高度依赖手机,而忽视了个人学习的重要性。
However, as far as I am concerned, phones play an important but not indispensable role in students’ learning.
然而，我认为，手机在学生们的学习中虽然重要但并非必不可少。
There is no denying that mobile phones have brought much convenience, but we are not supposed to rely on them too much in the process of study.
毫无疑问，手机给我们带来了很多便利，但是在学习过程中，我们不应该过度依赖手机。
In the first place, we should have a good command of knowledge on our own to cope with various situations without phones at hand.
首先,我们自身应该具有很好的知识储备以应对没有手机在手边时的各种情况。
In the second place, it is our personal knowledge that promotes the development of phones.Without the basic education at school, phones would not be invented.
其次，正是我们的个人知识促进了手机的发展。如果没有学校的基础教育，就没有手机的问世。
All in all, over-dependence on phones does more harm than good.
总而言之，过度依赖手机弊大于利。
Therefore, we should properly balance the relationship between phones and study.
因此，我们应该合理地平衡手机与学习的关系。
Only in this way can we benefit most from our learning process.
只有这样我们才能够从学习过程中获得最大的收益。

短语

be highly dependent on…高度依赖…
overlook 忽 视 ， 忽 略
indispensable 必不可少的；
be supposed to …应该…
have a good command of …很好地掌握…
at hand 在手边
in the first place ...首先
in the second place...其次