GRE Analytical Writing

Issue

开头:转述文章内容+亮明自己观点

结尾:重新阐明自己观点

BODY:

尽量不用例证法 而用引证法

三段,正反一比二

可以直接并列,对有些题目也可考虑借用驳论法

实在不行一正一反



Argument

  大致写作思路:

1.分析文章:

分离论点和论据(记一个简要的笔记)

分析论点的问题类型:找指向性信息/分辨观点和事实/不要忘记CA

挑出要写的逻辑错误,并考虑是否形成段间让步递进

思考攻击反例,考虑是否形成段内让步递进

2.套用模版写出文章

先写开头和结尾

三个正文段 每个正文段两个反例攻击角度(如果没有可省)

写好后一定留出时间检查基本的拼写几语法错误

模版:

1.开头:

1.1指出论点

(发出人非作者)It is argued in the statement that + C(基本copy)

(发出人是作者)In the statement, the author argues that + C(基本copy)

1.2复述论据(迫不得已可选择)

To support her reasoning, the author cites that…/ the author cites the following facts and evidence.

1.3指出有问题

However, the reasoning is problematic.

However, there are some logical problems in the author’s argumentation.

At first glance, the author’s argumentation seems plausible to certain extent. However, with a detailed analysis, the readers could still identify some serious logical fallacies that could undermine the chain of reasoning in the statement.(凑字数)

2.结尾

all in all/ overall/ in sum/ to sum up/ in conclusion/ to conclude/ in a few words/ in short/in brief/ to put it in a nutshell/ conclusively/ accordingly,the reasons cited by the author cannot well support her reasoning in the statement as she expects.

3.正文段(根据逻辑错误类型分类)

(分析作者思路-指出作者的逻辑错误-找反例攻击-小总结)

A因果类

句一:分析作者思路

First, the author suggest thatthe installation of the high intensity lightingshould be the major contributor ofthe immediate decrease of the vandalism in the city of Belleville.

句二:指出作者逻辑错误

However, the author proposes here an oversimplified causal relationship analysis by carelessly or deliberately ignoring the fact that there should exist other factors that might lead to a same consequence.(另有他因)

However, the author pr oposes here an oversimpilified causal relationship analysis by carelessly or deliberately ignoring the fact that the reason proposed by her should actually be the results.(因果倒置)

However, the author proposes here an oversimplified causal relationship analysis by carelessly or deliberately ignoring the fact that the reason cited by her barely has anything to do with the result.(强加因果)

句三:找反例攻击-无模版

句四:小总结-跟着第一句来

As a result, the author cannot convince ...

B.类比类

句一:

Second, the author proposes that the city of Amburg could simply refer to the best practice in the city of Bellevile to empoly the high intensity lighting to decrease the crime rates.

句二:

However, the author does not consider that there should exist essential differences between those two cities,and it might greatly weaken the comparison of them.(个体-个体:差异性)

However, the author does not consider that alpha only describes the on-average situation of the group, and there should be no guarantee that one randomly selected individual from such a group would definitely follow the same trend.(整体-个体:特殊性)

However, the author does not take into account that the individual cannot display all the characteristics of the group. (个体-整体:代表性)

句三:找反例攻击-无模版

句四:小总结-跟着第一句来

Thus, it is unreasonable for the author to suggest...

C.Counter Argue

句一:分析作者思路

注意是分析思路,而非简单重复作者罗列的论据。

句二:指出作者的逻辑错误: 完全和第一句反着来即可

句三:找反例攻击-无模版句

句四:小总结

Should it be the case/If it were the real case, then the statement that ... could not hold water.

D.时间类

句一:分析作者思路

句二:指出作者逻辑错误

However, the author does not consider that the development of any item should contain unexpected fluctuations, so it could be quite difficult to make accurate prediction of the future trends simply referring to the past or current experiences.

句三:反例攻击

句四:小总结

Consequently, the author cannot guarantee that...

E.证词类

句一:分析作者思路

The author cites in the poll that most people are in support of Adams to promote Adams' public popularity.

句二:指出作者逻辑错误

However, the author fails to provide more detailed information as to how the participents have been selected and how the poll has been directed among those poeple.(定性)

However, since the sample size is not given in the arrgument, whether it is large enough to be statistically significant is questionable.(定量)

句三:找反例攻击

角度:bias/misleading(design)

句四:小总结

As a result, the poll cited by the author should be no more than a political propaganda, and the author cannot justify her support of Adams with such a poll.

F.条件不充分类:

句一:分析作者思路

The author simplistically claims that ...

句二:指出作者的逻辑错误

However, the author fails to consider that the profit is actually defined as a dynamic result of both revenues and costs, and a simple adjustment in just one section in the equation could not deliver the expected result.

句三:找反例攻击

句四:小总结

Accordingly, the profit improvement cannot be guaranteed as the author initially proposes in the argument.

Other.让步句:

Even if/ Even though/ Granted that... , the author still cannot propose that...

根据instruction来修改第一和第四句「待补」

a.evidence:

The first evidence that the author has to provide is whether...

b.assumption

The first implied assumption that needs to be examined is whether...

c.questions

The first question that the author fails to answer is whether...

d.explanation

One possible explanation to weaken the argument is that...

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