迷你写作:5.27

一、例句

The book is at its best when it treats Martin Luther King, Jr. and Malcolm X pragmatically, as two leaders with different inclinations and separate power bases but sometimes convergent interests. (The Economist) 

二、句子解析

参考译文:这本书最出色的地方就是它以务实的态度对待马丁·路德·金和马尔科姆·X,把他们当作两个有着不同倾向和各自权力基础,但有时利益趋同的领导者。

这句话选自最新一期《经济学人》Books and arts 版块的 The ballad of Malcolm and Martin 一文。这篇书评介绍了一本采用平行写法、同时为两位民权运动家——马丁·路德·金和马尔科姆·X 立传的新书。

如果我们自己来写这句话,可能会这样写:

What the book does the best is that it treats Martin Luther King, Jr. and Malcolm X pragmatically, as two leaders with different inclinations and separate power bases but sometimes convergent interests.

所以,当我们想表达“X 最出色的地方就是 Y”时,就可以使用“X is at its/his/her best when it/he/she does Y.”这个新的高频、地道句式。

再比如,《纽约时报》中也有这样的句子:

NASA is at its best when it has a short time to figure out things.

His book is at its best when it sticks to the Bronx and the fires there.

三、句式临摹

临摹句子:

The book is at its best when it treats them pragmatically, as two leaders with different inclinations and separate power bases but sometimes convergent interests.

提炼句式:

X is at its/his/her best when it/he/she does Y.(X 是单数)

X are at their best when they do Y.(X 是复数)

注意:

X 是名词,决定了后面物主代词的形式。

造句示范:

a)场景:这名巴西柔术女运动员最厉害的地方在于越挫越勇。

The female jiu-jitsuka is at her best when she is faced with formidable challengers.

注意:female, her, she 的一致性。

b) 场景:试卷越难越能体现出学霸的水平。

Top students are at their best when they take a hard test.

四、作业

参考第三部分的句式造句,造句时尽量用中文写出具体的语境。

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