Although we almost could get all information needed through social media and internet, especially when AI came to light, it seems all information is so easily attainable with a click of your mouse, I still firmly believe that reading book and critical thinking is essential and indispensable in our daily life, for one Ai will give everyone similar or same answers, resulting in practical issues or creating competitions. and even worse, it discourages you to think proactively and cultivate your rely on it, over time, many of us will lose the capability of thinking, analyzing and reflecting. Sometimes, it makes up things that do not exist, blurring the line between virtual reality and real world. on the other hand, you can imagine one read books with heart, carefully jots down notes, is diligent in critical thinking, will also be readily to master the AI technology and apply it very well. it is just like giving wings to a vigorous tiger, so in conclusion, as much as AI brings us convenience, allow accessible to knowledges, aids in expanding new technologies, we still cannot give up those essential skills such as reading a profound book, communicating with others and creating new knowledges, after ALL ai does not create knowledge, human does.
almost could get→ 搭配不自然，应为“can almost get”或直接用“can get”。
internet→ 前面缺冠词，应该是“the internet”。
when AI came to light→ 搭配不准确，通常说“with the rise of AI”。
it seems...I still firmly believe...→ 长句中主句为I still believe，中间插入了另一个完整句it seems...，应分句或改写，否则是run-on sentence。
reading book→ 应为“reading books”（可数名词）。
is essential and indispensable→ 主语是“reading books and critical thinking”，是复数，谓语动词应为are。
in our daily life→ 没错，但写作中更常用“in our daily lives”（强调每个人各自的生活）。
Ai→ 应大写为AI
for one→ 不清楚你是想说“首先”还是“举个例子”，可改为“For one thing,”
similar or same answers→ 应为similar or even identical answers（搭配更地道）
creating competitions→ 搭配不当，建议改为“creating unnecessary competition”
and even worse→ 应大写And, 作为新句开头
discourages you to think→ 应为discourages you from thinking（固定搭配）
cultivate your rely on it→ 严重错误，应为cultivates your reliance on it或makes you rely on it
逗号连接两个独立句子→ 这是comma splice，应分句或用连接词
thinking, analyzing and reflecting→ 正确，但建议加comma：thinking, analyzing, and reflecting
real world→ 前面缺冠词，应为the real world
on the other hand→ 应大写 On
one read books...jots down...is...will→ 主语是“one”，但动词时态混乱，没有保持结构一致
read books with heart→ 不地道，建议改为reads with intention或reads deeply
readily to master→ 应为is ready to master或can readily master
vigorous tiger→ 比喻很好，但英语中常说a tiger with wings或giving wings to a tiger
allow accessible to knowledges→ 严重错误，应为allows access to knowledge；knowledge 是不可数名词
creating new knowledges→ 同样错误，应为creating new knowledge
after ALL ai→ 拼写需规范，应为After all, AI
整段太长，逻辑混乱，应拆句重写
修改后的
Although we can now access almost all the information we need through social media and the internet—especially with the rise of AI, which seems to make knowledge attainable with just a click—I still firmly believe that reading books and practicing critical thinking remain essential and irreplaceable in our daily lives.
AI tends to provide similar or even identical answers to everyone, which may create practical issues or unnecessary competition. Even worse, it discourages proactive thinking and gradually builds our dependence on it. Over time, many people may lose the ability to think independently, analyze deeply, and reflect critically. Sometimes, AI even fabricates facts, blurring the line between the real world and virtual reality.
On the other hand, imagine someone who reads with intention, takes notes with care, and consistently engages in critical thinking—such a person is far more likely to master AI technology and use it creatively. It’s like giving wings to a tiger.
So in conclusion, as much as AI brings convenience, access to information, and support for innovation, we cannot afford to abandon the foundational skills that define human intelligence: reading profound books, engaging in meaningful conversations, and creating new knowledge. After all, AI does not create knowledge—humans do.
再次修改
Although we can find almost any information we need through social media and the internet—especially now that AI has made data just a click away—I still firmly believe that reading books and practicing critical thinking remain essential.
AI often gives everyone similar, if not identical, answers. That can create practical problems, intensify competition, and—worse—discourage proactive thought. Over time, we risk losing the ability to think, analyze, and reflect for ourselves. AI systems can even “hallucinate,” inventing facts that do not exist and blurring the line between virtual and real.
By contrast, someone who reads deeply, takes careful notes, and cultivates critical thinking is far better prepared to master AI and use it wisely—like adding wings to a tiger. In short, while AI delivers convenience, broader access to knowledge, and faster innovation, we must not abandon foundational skills such as deep reading, meaningful conversation, and original creation. After all, AI does not create knowledge; humans do.
