1，And then I did what I had never done in his presence, much less in his arms. I cried.

much less adv 更不用说；何况；

仿写：The boy didn't have a girlfriend, much less a wife. 这小伙子连女朋友都没有，更不用提老婆了。

2，I couldn't face him. I went straight for the revolving door.

生活中用得到的

the revolving door 旋转门

3，All I could hear was the click of my own heels on the linoleum.

linoleum 不可数名词（铺地用的）油毡，漆布 Linoleum is a floor covering which is made of cloth covered with a hard shiny substance.

4，'Screw Paris and music and all the crap you think you stole from me. I don't care, you sonovabitch. Can't you believe that?'

crap 本义为垃圾、粪便，日常用语中作为“shit”一词的洁版；

他们2个对话喜欢用脏话，==

扩展

Damn: 本义为“诅咒”，“(God) damn it”单独成句时一般译为“见鬼”或其他类似衍生词；

Crap:本义为垃圾、粪便，日常用语中作为“shit”一词的洁版；

Fuck: 做动词时译为“操”或其他类似语义，做形容词/副词时常译为“他妈的”

5，'Yeah, but who?' she said kind of plaintively.

plaintively adv 悲伤地；哀怨地 A plaintive sound or voice sounds sad.

仿写：Her voice sounds small and plaintively. 她的声音微弱而哀伤。