写作提纲
- 一、提出观点：
电脑在日常生活中虽然重要但并非必不可少
an important but not indispensable role
- 二、论证观点：
1、过度沉迷于电脑对我们的健康不利
exert a negative impact on our health
2、过度使用电脑会将我们隔离在社交圈之外
isolate us from the social circles
- 三、总结观点：
l、电脑确实改善了我们的生活
really promote our life
2、不应该在电脑上花费过多的时间而舍弃享受美好的生活（
should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life
范文
This Modern Life①
In the picture is a person using his computer all day, whether he is at work, at home, playing or in his sleep.
漫画中是一个人,一天当中他无时无刻不在使用电脑，不论是在工作时、在家时、玩游戏时，还是在睡眠中。
②This drawing vividly depicts a common phenomenon that computers nowadays deeply penetrate into our daily life and we can not do without it even for a minute.
这幅漫画生动地描述了一种普遍现象：电脑现在深深地渗透到我们的日常生活中，我们甚至一分钟都不能没有它。
③However, from my perspective, computers play an important but not indispensable role in our modem life.
尽管如此，在我看来，电脑在现代生活中虽然重要但并非必不可少
④It is true that computers make our life convenient and provide instant assistance.
诚然，电脑使我们的生活方便，并提供及时帮助。
But it is not a necessity.
但它并非生活必需品。
⑤To start with, excessive addiction to computers may exert a negative impact on our health.
首先，过度沉迷于电脑对我们的健康不利。
Instead of taking exercise in our spare time, we may be intrigued by the various contents on it.
我们可能着迷于电脑上五花八门的内容而忽略了在业余时间锻炼身体。
⑥Furthermore, indulging in computers may isolate us from the social circles. Since we can chat with the virtual friends via computers, we may not bother to communicate with families or Mends around us.
此外，过度使用电脑会将我们隔离在社交圈之外因为我们可以通过电脑与虚拟世界中时朋友交谈，所以我们可能不会费心去与身边的亲朋好友交流。
⑦In conclusion, as the product of the high technology, computer really promotes our life.
总之，作为高科技的产物，电脑确实改善了我们的生活。
⑧Nevertheless, we should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life.
但是我们不应该在电脑上花费过多的时间而舍弃享受美好的生活。
短语
使用
to start with和furthermore,从两个方面展开论证，层次分明。
使用in conclusion和nevertheless总结观点并提出建议。
penetrate into渗入，渗透 ；
from one’s perspective在某人看来；
indispensable必不可少的；
instant assistance及时帮助 ；
necessity必需品；
be intrigued by...对…着迷；
savor享受，欣赏
