Dear Mr. Sun,
It was rather a pleasure talking with you last week. As regards the possibility of my joining your team as an intern lawyer, you were so kind as to suggest me that I should take some time to make the decision and prepare for the coming exam of patent agent. I am working on it now and trying to convince my family that changing my career will benefit me in the long run. By the way, how about the partner who is going to give the nod along with you? I am a bit anxious that he will have a different opinion.Anyway, I am grateful for you giving me the opportunity.
Sincerely,
Zhefeng
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Dear Mr. Sun,
Thank you for taking the time out of yourtight schedule to talk to me regarding the possibility of my joining your teamas an intern lawyer. I appreciate your kind suggestion that I should take sometime to make the decision and prepare for the coming exam of patent agent. I amworking on it now and trying to convince my family that changing my career willbenefit me in the long run. I am just touching base, but also wondering aboutthe partner who is going to give the nod along with you. I am a bit anxiousthat he will have a different opinion. Would you be so kind as to inform me ofany updates? Thank you again for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Zhefeng
