Task1 of IELTS on March 3.2018
题目:The following charts illustrate the information about players of the electronic games in South Korea in 2003.Write a passage about the charts.
坡姐范文:
The pie charts demonstrate us the percentages about the Korean players in terms of age and gender distribution and best selling types of games in the year of 2003.
It is noticeable that in Korea the game players were mostly young generation (18-35) or even teenagers(under 18) ,since their percentages reached up to 77% .By contrast ,a mere 22% of players were over 36 years old .Not surprisingly , 72% players belonged to men ,while just 28% to women .
With respect to game types , actions were the most dominant that year , occupying nearly a half (43%) ,followed by sports ,at 20% .Ranking next was the type of racing ,3% lower than the proportion of sports . On the contrary , educational and role playing were sold not so well ,both with only 7% among all .Other types presented to be the least favourite .
Overall , the majority of Korean game players in 2003 were young males ,whoseemed to fancy actions and sports as their perference while playing .
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