大家好,每周一题又和各位见面啦。
在刚刚过去的这个周末,我累计上了将近20个小时的课,覆盖高一高二高三。很累,但看到同学们在英语学习上所取得的进步,又觉得很值。现在,已经迫不及待期待这个周末和你们的再见啦。
这次,我们来看一道高考短文改错真题,来自2016年全国卷Ⅰ。在周末的班课上,我分别用这道题测试过高二和高三的学生,成绩最好的学生拿到了8分,最低的4分。你们呢?试试看。
老规矩,拆句子,如下:
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.
Though not very big, but therestaurant is popular in our area.
It is always crowded with customers at meal times.
Somepeople even had to wait outside.
My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.
Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.
My uncles ays that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.
Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.
第一句,My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 不少同学都做错了这道题,能看出句子怪怪的,但就是不知道应该怎么改。
close to后是个宾语从句,I live为主谓结构,live后缺一个表示地点的引导词,因此答案为that改成where.
第二句,表虽然...但是...这个意思时,though跟but不能共存,因此答案为删除but,或者将but改成yet. though后面如果跟的是一个句子时,这时候也可以删除though.
第三句,It is always crowded with customers at meal times. 全句无误。
第四句,考察时态。本文是在陈述一个事实,应用一般现在时,因此答案为had改成have.
第五句,that后是个宾语从句:the key to his success is honest. 成功的关键是诚信,此处诚信应为名词,因此答案为honest改为名词形式:honesty.
第六句,that后同样是个宾语从句:fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. 根据常识可知,做饭时需要新鲜的蔬菜和高质量的油,因此本句第一处错误为连词的误用,应改or为and.
另,蔬菜和油只能被用来做饭,因此第二处错误为语态的误用,应改using为used.
第七句,that后仍是一个宾语从句:he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. dream是不及物动词,需要一个介词of做桥梁,才能加宾语,dream of doing sth表梦想做某事。因此本句第一处错误应改为在dream和becoming直接加介词of.
in a short period of time,意为在短时期内,没有特指的含义,因此第二处错误为冠词的误用,改the为a.
第八句,that后仍是一个宾语从句:our business will grow steady. 表我叔叔希望的内容为他的生意将稳定增长,第一处错误为代词的误用,应把our改成his. 或者,也可以用定冠词the特指我叔叔的生意。因此,第一处错误应改our为his或the.
生意稳定增长,增长作为副词修饰稳定这个动作,此处为形容词副词的误用。因此,第二处错误应改steady为副词形式steadily.
总结:如果将难度系数分为由1到10这十个等级的话,本题难度系数为7级。尤其是第一处引导词的误用,不少同学都没能看出错点。其余九处错误,考点较为均衡:谓语动词、名词、形容词副词、介词、冠词、连词等都有所涉及。同学们在课下,应针对此题型的设错特点,加强针对性练习。