Dear Ms Jenkins,
How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, I plan to apply for a part time job in a foreign company in the coming summer vacation. So, I have written my application letter and my resume and I am writing to turn to you for help. For one thing, would you be so kind as to tell me if my application letter has been written in the correctformat? For another, I would appreciate it if you could help me improve my vocabulary and grammar used in my application letter, which is of great significance to me. Hopefully, you could do me the favor and help me win this precious chance. Thank you so much. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
