2018年6月6级写作

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of building trust between businesses and consumers. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

分析:缺乏信任肯定不是好事。所以这个基本上用我们所说的坏事的套路去写,基本上是写提出问题、解决问题、分析问题三步。

涉及短语单词:

account for 对..作出解释

result in 导致

result from 由..引起

a mounting number of 越来越多的

taking a look around 环顾四周

too many to enumerate 不胜枚举

leading reason 主要原因

either...or.. 要么..要么

substandard 不合规格的

commodity 商品

lose trust in 对..失去信任

picky 挑剔的

worrisome 令人担心的

in view of 鉴于,考虑到

effective measures 有效的措施

deteriorates vi.恶化

imperative 必要的

enforced adj实施的 v执行(enforce)

punish 惩罚

enhance 提高

every reason充分的理由

remedied 补救


句子模板:

A number of factors can account for the problem,but the leading reason is...

On the one hand....On the other hand

Whatever the reason is,if the situation is allowed to continue,the consquence will be worrisome.

In view of the seriousness of the problem,effective measures must be taken before the situation deteriorates.

First...Secondly...With these measures taken,we have every reason to believe that the problem will be remedied in the near future.

范文

Build Trust between Businesses and Consumers

  (提出问题)The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of cases resulting from the conflict between businesses and consumers. Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. All these cases result in the loss of trust between the two sides.

  (分析问题)A number of factors can account for the problem, but the leading reason is the cheating behavior of either the business or the consumer. On the one hand, some stores may have sold substandard commodities to the customer, which caused the latter to lose trust in the former. On the other hand, some customers might be too picky, which ruined their image in the seller’s mind. Whatever the reason is, if the situation is allowed to continue, the consequence will be worrisome.

  (解决问题)In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before the situation deteriorates. First, it is imperative that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to punish those who cheat in the market. Secondly, both businesses and consumers should enhance the awareness of mutual understanding and mutual respect. With these measures taken, we have every reason to believe that the problem will be remedied in the near future.

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