Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express yourthanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should writeat least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
解析:
本篇表达对老师的感谢,语气上要注意更加正式。因为是师生关系,第一段除了交代写信目的,还需要进行自我介绍,让老师知道你是谁。第二段展开具体内容,即老师在你考大学的过程中给予了哪些帮助;第三段重申目的,表达感谢之余,可以加上自己的决心或对未来的规划。
信件写作注意格式,要有称谓,正文,敬语和署名。
Dear Miss Wang,
How are you? My name is Li Ming, one of yourformer students. I am writing to tell you the good news that I have beenadmitted to the college I have dreamed of. And I shall extend my heartfeltappreciation to you for the guidance and help you have rendered me.
First, youhave provided me useful information of the college that I applied for. Second,it is you who strengthened my confidence and kept encouraging me to pursue mydream when I almost gave up. Furthermore, you have devoted your valuable timeto solving my problems in my English course.
The collegelife opens a new chapter of my life, and I will do my best to make itmeaningful. Please accept my gratitude, now and always.
Best regards,
Li Ming
译文:
亲爱的王老师,
您好吗?我写信是想要告诉你一个好消息:我被理想的大学录取了。在此,我想要对您的指导和帮助表达我衷心的感谢。
首先,您为我提供了我所申请学校的有用信息。其次,是您在我快要放弃的时候增强了我的信心,一直鼓励我追求自己的梦想。再者,您花费了很多宝贵的时间,解决我在英语课程方面的难题。
大学生活翻开了我人生的新篇章。我将尽我所能让我的大学生活过得有意义。请接受我无尽的感激之情。
最诚挚的问候,
李明