From the story of Granny Joyce , I learned that learning is a lifelong journey . She is an example for me , as a grade 9 student , I will never stop learning after graduation , just as the saying goes " Never too old to learn ."
The policy of " Double Reduction " has been carried out . It has a great influence on our study and life . Now , what we have to do is to make a change to get used to it . I think it ' s important for us to develop the good habit of self - control just like Joyce . At school , we need to pay more attention to what is taught in class and try to solve all the problems in time . While after school , we can make a plan to better manage our time to develop some hobbies , but make sure they are good for our study and health .
1、文章整体脉络清晰。
1）开篇点题“…learning is a lifelong journey.”
2）自然过渡“She is an example for me…”引出“…I will never stop learning…”巧妙引用“Never too old to learn."
3、双减实施，产生影响，适应，发表观点，在校和课后安排。行文紧凑，衔接自然，水到渠成。
4、不成熟的看法：
1）“…what we have to do is to make a change to get used to it .”这里的“to make a change”明显多余，删除更简洁流畅。
2）最后三句话过长，显得拖沓不流畅。可以长句短句交替进行，会有错落之感。
书面表达是英语教学中的难点，想要培养学生良好的写作能力，万惠琴老师的《基于主题意义探究的复习课》是一种很好的模式，输入丰富，输出才可能更加出彩。
我在尝试每天让学生记住2个单元的标题，希望每天积累一点点，可以破解学生写不出正确的句子的尴尬局面。但短期内很难检测效果，要密切关注学生的情况反馈。
中考一天天逼近，比复习更重要的是他们的心理状态。当然，也包括我自己的心理状态。每天至少有一个瞬间能感到满足和欢愉，这一天就算值得。
