
课程4
1. Practice examples
Example 1

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- 主语太长
- passive voice
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hedge word: appreciable
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Example 2

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改为⬇️

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Example 3

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改为⬇️

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Example 4

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问题

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Example 6

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Example 7

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2. A few grammar tips
(1) Data: 复数(The data are...)
(2) Affect vs. effect (verb vs. noun,多数情况下)
(3) Compared to vs. compared with
Compared to = to point out similarities
Compared with = to point out differences between similar things
(4) That vs. which
"That" is the restrictive (defining) pronoun
后面的内容是必需的
"Which" is the nonrestrictive (non-defining) pronoun
后面的内容是可有可无的,extra information

That vs. which
(5) Singular antecedents
Do not use "they" or "their" when the subject is singular.

Singular antecedents
