静态图表

范文一:C4P78P166

范文二: 见下图

1.图表在总体概括(结尾段),注意不能写成男性的比例上升,女性的比例下降,因为这是静态图表。

2. 注意分段的方式

被遮挡的地方是Private training institue;  univeristy

The bar chart compares the percentage of male and females teachers in six types of educational institutions in the United Kingdom in 2010.

Women predominated in schools for children.This was particularly true of schools for very young children. Over 95% of nursery school teachers, for example, were females. The situation was similarly one-sided in primary schools, where over 90% of teachers were women.

Men and women were more equally represented in teaching institutions catering for older children and young adults: secondary schools and colleges. College lectures, for example, were 50% female and 50% male.

Males held a larger share of teaching posts in higher-level institutions. This was particularly true for universities,where twice as many males were teaching staff than females.

Overall, women were more likely to hold the more typically maternal role of teaching young children, while males predominated in the higher status teaching role of university lectures.

任务三:静态图表全文写作

The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

静态图表范文

The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.

Boys aged between 10 and 15 clearly favour playing on games consoles over chatting online. According to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily.Furthermore, the majority of boys spend more than one hour each day on games consoles, where 10% do this activity for four hours or more.

By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared with about 50% of this group who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.

Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the Internet. However, completely different trends can be seen if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls.

任务三: 静态图句型练习

The bar chart below shows the numbers of students sitting examinations in eight different subjects and the percentage of students gaining top marks.

Note: 在静态图表写作中,通常需要进行比较和对比,这就会用到比较级和最高级。如:

A higher percentage of students gained top marks in Mathematics than in Chemistry.

The most popular subject was Mathematics.

任务3.1: 请根据上面的提示,用比较级或最高级完成图片中1-6题的填空。

任务3.2: 用括号里的词重写sentence 1-5.

例: Nearly as many students sat the Art and Design exam as did the Chemistry exam. (similar)

Similar numbers of students sat examinations in Art and Design and in Chemistry.

1.More girls than boys passed their English examinations. (fewer)

2. The same number of boys and girls achieved a passing grade in Mathematics. (as…as)

3. Boys did well in Technology; girls, in contrast, did well in language-related subjects. (whereas)

4. The number of passes in Religious Studies was higher for girls than for boys. (lower)

5. Nearly as many girls as boys passed the Economics exam. (similar)

提示: 上面的练习不是为了练语法,而是为了练句型变化。除了不同的比较关系外,一定要注意到句子结构的变化。比如下面两个:

•   10 million people voted in the election.

•   The number of people who voted in the election was 10 million.

看似简单,实际上90%的同学只会写第二种。

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