NCE-2 27 A wet night

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Lesson27 A wet night 雨夜

Late in the afternoon, the boys put up their tent in the middle of a field. As soon as this was done, they cooked a meal over an open fire. They were all hungry and the food smelt good. After a wonderful meal, they told stories and sang songs by the camp fire. But some time later it began to rain. The boys felt tired so they put out the fire and crept into their tent. Their sleeping-bags were warm and comfortable, so they all slept soundly. In the middle of the night, two boys woke up and began shouting. The tent was full of water! They all leapt out of their sleeping-bags and hurried outside. It was raining heavily and they found that a stream had formed in the field. The stream wound its way across the field and then flowed right under their tent!

  • Late(时间上)接近终了,临近末了 Late means near the end of a day, week, year, or other period of time.

    It was late in the afternoon. 傍晚
    It was late at night.

  • put up 建造;搭建;设置 If people put up a wall, building, tent, or other structure, they construct it so that it is upright.

    put up a tent
    put up a new fence
    put up barriers

  • field n. 田野

    We walk in the fields.

  • as soon as. conj.immediately after something.
    • His soon left home as soon as he died.
  • cook v.烹饪

    cook a meal/dinner/meat

  • over an open fire
    • over prep. 在上方
    • open fire a.敞开的;无遮盖的;无围挡的 n.明火
  • wonderful a.精彩的;绝妙的;极好的 If you describe something or someone as wonderful, you think they are extremely good.
  • camp fire 通常使用组合词 campfire
  • some time later. later: 指谈论到时间或当前时间以后
    • I'll call you 10 years later.
    • I'll call you later.
  • put out (=stop) fire
  • creep(crept) (= crawl) 爬行
    • crawl into bed/sleeping-bag 劳累地爬上床/爬进睡袋
    • craw out of bed
  • sleeping-bag 露营用的睡袋
  • comfortable a.让人舒服的 => comfortableness n.舒适性
    • v. ease 使..安逸 n. comfort 舒服
    • n. comfort 慰籍 v. comfort 安慰, 抚慰 => a. comforting 令人欣慰的
  • soundly a. 彻底的(completely) a. 深睡地(deeply)
    • She soundly rejected my proposal.
    • She slept soundly after a cry.
  • leap(leapt) v. 跃
    • leap out of <-> creep into

    he leapt out of bed/his car...

  • wind(wound): (道路、河流或一队人)蜿蜒向前,曲折而行,迂回 If a road, river, or line of people winds in a particular direction, it goes in that direction with a lot of bends or twists in it.
    • The road winds uphill. (uphill adv. 上坡)
    • The river winds through the valley.

耗时: 50 分钟

From One of the boys's View:

We went camping yesterday and we got a unfortable experience. It was late in the afternoon when we put up a tent in the middle of the field. As soon as we had done this, we made an open fire and cooked a meal over it because we were all hungry. The meal smelt good and tasted decilious as well. We had a wonderful supper. Then we sat around the campfire and told stories and sang songs. Some time later, it started raining. We were all tired so we put out the fire then slept in the tent with wrapped by our own sleeping-bags. About middle night, I was woken up by a cold sense of water. I shouted because the tent was full of water. My shouting woke all my friends up. All of us leapt out of our sleeping-bags and hurried outside. It rained terrible heavily. A stream had formed and wound through the field and just passed under our tent.

耗时: 25 分钟

Knowledges

  • with wrapped by our own sleeping-bags. with好像没这种用法
    • 尝试改成 then put on our own sleeping-bags and slept in the tent
  • wake 醒;醒来;唤醒;弄醒 When you wake or when someone or something wakes you, you become conscious again after being asleep.
    • wake up = wake
    • waked/woke, waked/woken(US. woke)
  • flow v.流, 这个动词忘记用上了.
    • the stream flows under our tent.

From the father of a boy's View:

傍晚时分,孩子们在田野中央搭起了帐篷。这件事刚刚做完,他们就在篝火上烧起了饭。他们全都饿了,饭菜散发出阵阵香味。他们美美地吃了一顿饭后,就围在营火旁讲起了故事,唱起了歌。但过了一阵子。天下起雨来,于是他们扑灭了篝火,钻进了帐篷。睡袋既暖和又舒服,所以,他们都睡得很香。午夜前后,有两个孩子醒了,大声叫了起来。原来帐篷里到处都是水!他们全都跳出睡袋,跑到外面。雨下得很大,他们发现地上已经形成了一条小溪。那小溪弯弯曲曲穿过田野,然后正好从他们的帐篷底下流过去。

Last night, I was woken by a emergency phone call. It was from my son. He went camping yesterday with his four classmates. But they ran into the trouble at mid-night. They reached the camp field in the late afternoon. Then they put up a tent and cooked and had a delicious meal. They had a wonderful night with stories and songs. They even did not feel tired and sleepy until it started raining. They were so tired that they were unconscious before their tent was full of water. They at last found that a stream had formed and flowed right under their tent as it rained too heavily. Then they are cold without a shelter. I drove my car to where they stayed to take them home.

耗时: 20 分钟

Knowledges

  • emergency
  • go camping
  • run into trouble 陷入麻烦
  • shelter (躲避恶劣天气或危险的)遮蔽物,庇护处,掩体 A shelter is a small building or covered place which is made to protect people from bad weather or danger.
    • a bus shelter 公交车候车亭
    • air-raid shelter

Remembers

  • comfortable a.让人舒服的 => comfortableness n.舒适性
    • v. ease 使..安逸 n. comfort 舒服
    • n. comfort 慰籍 v. comfort 安慰, 抚慰 => a. comforting 令人欣慰的
  • soundly a. 彻底的(completely) a. 深睡地(deeply)
    • She soundly rejected my proposal.
    • She slept soundly after a cry.

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