20180610雅思全程班强化写作3

首段---个人观点

1. 基本款(一个观点):

Personally/ as far as  I am concerned/ for my part

I agree/ disagree with

升级版(一个观点之倾向):

should be encouraged

it is better to do  sth.

...could benefit more from...

升级版(一个观点之不同意):

there are some facts indicating that this opinion seems far-fetched

there are indications that... has brought various drawbacks 

the drawbacks of.... deserve people's greatest attention


2. 转折句:

While, although

Although wome people are of the opinion that.....,I insist that...

However

Some people are of the opinion tthat,,,Howeve, I ....


首段结构回顾:

引入话题

题目改写

自己观点


主体段

段内结构、段间关系

1.段内结构:

topic sentence + supporting details

Topic sentence

位置          形式                     注意

段首 直接给出&回应主题 每段不重复

如何写TS:

Identify topic key words

Brainstorm( words/ phrases):观点在.....方面的好处/坏处/原因

Sort the most relevantideas intoa sentence

段落展开:

2. 段间关系

分段方法:

让 驳

让 驳驳

段间逻辑:

让步 转折 并列

条件论证:

比较论证:


尾段:

作业:

作文写在Real skill上

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