上周六的新概念课程,Tyger给家长和孩子们深入讲解了想象力写作的心法“万物泛灵”,并现场演示,家长和孩子们都坚信:只要用心,我们创作的绘本甚至可以超过“故事奶奶”的杰作。
Tyger心中的女神:故事奶奶Joy Cowley
孩子们的创作热情如火山喷发,接下来Tyger展示孩子们的作品并做赏析点评。
作品:《The Racing Car》,作者:Flyer,年龄:二年级,方式:仿写
Flyer and Sophia went for a ride in the racing car. Sophia(母) Flyer(子)
The rear wing(尾翼) came off, "We don't need the rear wing", Sophia said.
The mirror(后视镜) came off. "We don't need the mirror." Sophia said.
The rain wiper came off. "We don't need the rain wiper," Sophia said. The door came off. "We don't need the door," Sophia said.
The wheels came off. "We need wheels." Flyer said
Tyger点评:整个作品,文字优美,构图十分巧妙,尤其是用黄色箭头串联起来的行车路线,将全文紧紧的连接在一起,让人看完一页迫不及待看下一页。
附件:“故事奶奶”原作《The Old Truck》
亲爱的各位家长,Tyger深深感觉孩子的创造力是无穷无尽的,欢迎您留言,给出自己的评语。