《老人与海》

原文

"I can remember the tail slapping and banging and the thwart breaking and the noise of the clubbing. I can remember you throwing me into the bow where the wet coiled lines were and feeling the whole boat shiver and the noise of you clubbing him like chopping a tree down and the sweet blood smell all over me. "

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分句解读：

"I can remember the tail slapping and banging and the thwart breaking and the noise of the clubbing.

这是宾语从句的句型 I can remember sth

sth = (the tail slapping and banging) and (the thwart breaking) and (the noise of the clubbing.) 三个并列宾语从句。

词汇

slapping[ˈslæpɪŋ] （slap （用手）扇，拍打）

banging [ˈbæŋɪŋ]（bang 击打声）

thwart [θwɔːt] 独木舟的横梁

clubbing [ˈklʌbɪŋ] （club 大棒）

分：

"I can remember the tail slapping and banging 

我能记得（鱼）尾巴砰砰的拍打着。

and the thwart breaking 船的横木给打断了

and the noise of the clubbing. 

还有棍子击打（鱼）的声音

合：

我能记得（鱼）尾巴砰砰的拍打着，把船的横木给打断了，还有棍子击打（鱼）的声音。

整理：

"我记得鱼尾巴砰砰地拍打着，船上的座板给打断了，还有棍子打鱼的声音。

I can remember you throwing me into the bow where the wet coiled lines were and feeling the whole boat shiver and the noise of you clubbing him like chopping a tree down and the sweet blood smell all over me. " 

本句也是宾语从句的句型 I can remember sth然后三个宾从。

不过，第一个宾从中套了一个状从（单独拿出来看）

you throwing me into the bow （where the wet coiled lines were）

倒着分析

先看 where the wet coiled lines were

湿漉漉的钓索在的地方

用来补充the bow（船头）这个位置

所以应该分到宾语从句内部

I can remember you throwing me into the bow where the wet coiled lines were

词汇

bow [baʊ] 船头

分：

I can remember 我还记得

you throwing me into the bow 你把我扔到船头

where the wet coiled lines were 

湿漉漉的钓索在的地方

合：

我还记得，你把我推到堆着湿漉漉的钓索的船头。

整理：

我记得你把我朝船头猛推，那儿搁着湿漉漉的钓索卷儿，

and feeling the whole boat shiver

分：

and feeling 感觉到

the whole boat shiver 整条船都在颤抖

合：

（我）感觉整条船都在颤抖

and the noise of you clubbing him like chopping a tree down

分：

and the noise of …的声音

you clubbing him 你用棍子打它

like chopping a tree down 像是砍一棵树

合：

你用棍子击打它的声音就像是砍树一样。

and the sweet blood smell all over me. " 

分：

and the sweet blood smell 甜丝丝的血的味道

all over me” 布满我的全身”

合：甜丝丝的血的味道，布满我的全身”

整段解析

"I can remember the tail slapping and banging and the thwart breaking and the noise of the clubbing. I can remember you throwing me into the bow where the wet coiled lines were and feeling the whole boat shiver and the noise of you clubbing him like chopping a tree down and the sweet blood smell all over me. " 

"我记得鱼尾巴砰砰地拍打着，船上的座板给打断了，还有棍子打鱼的声音。我记得你把我朝船头猛推，那儿搁着湿漉漉的钓索卷儿，我感到整条船在颤抖，听到你啪啪地用棍子打鱼的声音，像有砍一棵树，还记得我浑身上下都是甜丝丝的血腥味儿。"

sailfish

日拱一卒无有尽

功不唐捐终入海

21年秋，夜，Simon