2.4 复盘

杨静复盘

学到了什么?

1)即兴演讲时,如果话题不熟悉,可尝试找一个角度切换到自己熟悉的领域,eg:Henry在回答一本让他哭泣的书时,开头直说没有这种情况,并随后展开了一个和书相关的情感故事;

2)I mpossible-I am possible,Mina的演讲里这两个词的转化用的特别棒,并且几个场景里有关坐的场景现场都有一个椅子来辅助,加之活泼的动作

、夸张的语气以及和Maple师傅的搞笑互动,让大家在轻松又嗨皮的气氛中不知不觉被激励到了

3) 在准备比赛过程中,我负责为自己安排过的工作托底,托底李天王Jimmy负责为我没有考虑到的问题托底,想问题很周到。

做的好的地方

1)演讲中尝试使用歌曲、夸张的语言表达来活跃现场气氛

2)准备比赛过程中,通过拆解将任务落实到个人,随时提醒并为自己安排的工作托底收尾

下次可以改进的地方?

1)演讲的收尾太过仓促,没有过渡,故事和结论之间连接得太突兀

2)因为紧张和观众互动相对比较少,还是需要多上台练脸皮呀

3)拖延,比如在活动结束后想立马放松所以迟迟不复盘,直到现在️

4)任务安排:本次模拟比赛主持人部分分配的工作太多,以后的日常会议和比赛中制作agenda的工作尝试由接待官来分担

@Henry宽浩 Henry, so kind of you to give us so nice feedbacks, you are really a considerate boy,before the meeting you offered us pretty useful suggestions of judges and agenda, in the meeting you gave us a wonderful model of table topic speech, and even now i can see your eyes of finding the beauty and encouragement towards us, pretty excellent friend, Thank you VERY MUCH

@Kevin KevinYour English expression is so excellent,我怕英文夸的不够劲儿,中文再夸一遍,你的英文表达水平真的好赞啊,你知道吗,你整个演讲过程中,Maple师傅一直在下边跟我唠叨说,“Kevin真的好棒啊,太会讲故事了,那个电影我也看过特别感人,他这个角度抓的太好了”,you are so brave to stand on the demo contest stage to do table topic speech, to say the truth i cannot ,so what i can do is to seek more people for this part, i don't know it was the first time of you ,i envy you.

@Emma Thank you for your 临危受命to join this tt, this is really a difficult part, you did 2 times in one day,真的好勇敢,you are always rushing towards difficulties,the power scared me a lot.

@金瑛 Rachel,you looked like a hip-hop star on the stage, seemingly you were ready to 来一段说唱that day ,pretty 动感,and the topic was quite fresh and attractive for me,Thanks a lot for your suggestion for me ,i need more eye contact with the audience,i was really nervous,不淡定啊,next time i will try more interaction with the audience, Thanks again

Henry 宽浩复盘

I think yesterday’s meeting was amazing. I got the excitement and loveliness from all your speeches!

@金瑛 Rachel, your speech was so interesting. You made us laugh a lot! I like your freestyle very much. I think you are like a rock star on he stage[Grin]

@逗儿它姨 Jennica, you let us know you as a lovely Aries girl. Your performance was so natural, and your control of voice was excellent!

@一片双儿 Shaun, like I said, your speech was full of sincerity. You perfectly conveyed what you saw, experienced, and and most importantly what you FELT. I think presenting feelings is the ultimate goal of making speeches.

@赵文洁 Jamie, as your club fellow, I’m so proud of your performance yesterday! I think you’re a genius in story telling. Looking forward to your next story!

@Mina 刘玟雅 Mina, I think you are like a beautiful dancer on the stage. You can move your body so freely along the story, which is a talent not everyone could learn. You are the best!

On summary, I think one common thing that all speakers showed was the lively energy coming from yourselves. That might be why many of us like Toastmasters—to discover the true beauty of life.

一片双儿复盘

学到了什么?

1)即兴演讲时,可以提前准备一些关键词和素材,然后根据题目,进行转换,比如Yuki的读英语书会哭,不仅实现了巧妙的转换,还给人耳目一新的感觉;

2)平时积累素材,除了事件和内容之外,也可以留心记录事件发生时的情感,事件或内容本身可能比较复杂,难以在短时间内表述清楚,而情感又最容易引起共鸣,正如Mason和Henry所说,平时积累情感,台上表达情感;

3)做好全力以赴的事情,同时也做好可能惨败的打算,Koyuki的小蜜蜂的故事,很有启发;

做的好的地方?

鼓起勇气上了台

下次可以改进的地方?

可以改进的地方太多,先定一个小目标,下次挺直腰杆,把紧张憋在心里~

Kevin复盘

It was my first time on a Toastmaster’s stage giving an improvisational speech. I was quite nervous before my turn. However, as soon as I got on the podium, the fear and tense disappeared. I think I gave a prompt response to the table topic, which was to describe a book that once let me cry. To be honest, I never ever had any experience crying for literature, so I was a little lost by the topic. Therefore, I had to pick up any possible book/movie/etc. that flashed over my mind. Luckily, there was one really impressed me before, although as I said, I didn’t actually cry for it. So, after had determined which book to talk about, I could do nothing but think about a way to finish my speech. I knew I had to finish this thinking process within a twinkling of an eye, so I picked up a very very commonplace pattern — to tell the story of the book — which I still believe was a bad choice. I should have given myself a couple of seconds reconsidering how to organize my speech, however, due to the nervousness, I didn’t. Another thing that bothered me was the poor word-choosing I used to make during my speeches, without any exception, I chose a couple of inadequate words again. I hope by participating the Toastmaster events, I’m able to make some improvements on that. Generally speaking, I can understand why I wasn’t a winner of this contest after being aware of some of my weaknesses, but still hope to receive  more comments regarding my speech. I wish I can learn more from the toastmasters and everybody from the TM events. Look forward to another meeting.


逸博复盘

通过这次的模拟英文演讲比赛和即兴演讲比赛,作为一名计票员,不仅了解了计票员的工作职责,还锻炼了耐心,最重要的是熟悉了比赛流程和氛围。作为一名刚加入头马的新人,看到了比赛会如此的激烈,自己要想参赛可得加把劲儿了。

Yuki复盘

最大的感悟是,一定要提高英语。英语是基础工具,至少要有这个工具,我才能更好地fellow my heart,去尽情演绎我想表达的内容。尤其看到很多很多人在备稿/即兴,侃侃而谈,特别憧憬自己能成为一个享受舞台的人。

Lisa复盘

For me the most impressed thing is that people who are brave enough to stand on the stage to improve their expression skills. It’s really a big step for everyone. Some specific skills worth mentioned, e.g. tiny body gestures, different intonation for different purposes, and inserting songs and vivid images, etc. I learned a lot from this activity, and joyful time with everyone as well. Hope I could learn more on this platform in the future.

Emma复盘

I am very happy to attend our demo English and TT contest speech meeting.

Talk about my performance in TT section. There a long way for me to go. Far from the other contesters, I need more clear structure and more fluent English. What I need to do? More practice in future TT section and more story collection. By the way, daily life’s emotion feeling is important. I regret that as I am the last one, so I couldn’t get how other contesters performed. I want to learn from them.

[Laugh]@逗儿它姨 thank u jennica offer me the precious opporunity to attend TT. Especially in our VPE team, i learned a lot from u all guys. just i said in TT, trying to learn new let me not 被拍在沙滩上

金瑛复盘

Actually,i have delivered the speech one time before.And i messed up it at that time.After more practice,this time i felt better than last time.

-So my first point is :Be fully prepared,it can reduce your nervous.

That day i was deeply lost myself in every speech.I appreciated the way you delivered your speech with full of emotion,open body language,vocal variety,and the connection with audience.

-So i got the second point is :If you want make your speech attractive,focus on honing the speech skills,such like body-language,vocal variety,eye-contact,interaction and so on.

Last one,i will express my own opinion.

It's a valuable platform and i really really appreciate that Startup club offer this opportunity  to me and other speakers to review again.In this time,I found my self-confidence and learn a lot skills from other speakers.Thanks a lot~

Emmily复盘

To be the host of the last meeting I think the most important thing is  preparation and time management which I did not do well this time. For this point I need sincerely thank Jimmy 's help to manage and print the stuffs that we need .Next time I will definitely do a better job on my preparation for taking any role.Overall there are still so many parts that I need to improve but it is a really wonderful and happy experience for me.And thank you all for the support during the meeting.

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