Yesterday, I received a message from one of my old friends. Then he sent me a file named as the personal statement.
I read it and knew that he would like to apply for admission to the University and start his Master's Degree with a major he is fond of.
I have to say he can express with words perfectly what's he is thinking about and express his feelings in a proper manner. And he wrote a very beautiful article based on his past experience including work, life, changes of his mind, etc.
He shared this file with me because he want me to share some comments from my point of view. Then, I appreciate it and feedback some thinkings from my side.
Finally, I asked him how to write in this way to express oneself's feelings. And very much admire his ability to express his feelings in a comfortable way.
He said just focusing more on your own feelings.
