Review 72-74
DD 75:
M: 12 k, 5 k, one mark, kids dash, April 1.
C: See you at the Seahawks' 12k, 5k run/walk and Kids' Dash, April 1.
DD 76:
M: 24-hour access to cupcakes is nightmare for ..., but this vending concept is advantage for sprencles when it comes to cupcake competition.
C: 24-hour access to cupcakes-- it's a nightmare for dieters, but this vending concept is an advantage for Sprinkles when it comes to cupcake competition.
DD 77:
M: next week, let's take a white desert, where from a distance the linestone lookes like snow and rock piles like iceberg.
C: Next we enter the White Desert where from a distance the limestone looks like snow and rock piles like icebergs.
DD 78:
M: ... tell me about this.
wait wait what time is it?
It's 10:20.
10 o'clock is kind of fine. Your copy will have to change.
No no no, the .. time is 10:30.
10 o'clock, if you do not call at 10 o'clock.
no no, 10:30.
C: Call Jeff and tell him about this.
No, wait wait, what time is it?
It's 10:20.
10:00 is the cut-off time. You don't call people after 10:00.
No no no, the cut-off time is 10:30.
10:00. you don't call after 10:00.
No no, it's 10:30.
