教师要由学生来评价吗?
Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or Disagree?
词汇、短语、句子提示
教学方法:educational methods, pedagogy, teaching strategies, classroom deliverance
学生在不同学期感受不同: Students may feel differently from term to term
学期:term, period, semester
评价、测试: evaluate, judge, score, grade
发起:initiate
影响:influence, effect, impact
公正、客观地: objectively, without bias, fairly, justly
下面是老外写的范文:
Many schools employ a system of evaluation in order to judge the performance of teachers. The evaluations are usually completed by their students. I believe these evaluations are helpful in a number of ways.
开头陈述背景事实、表明自己的态度。
For one thing, students are often too shy or afraid of confrontation when it comes to addressing their teachers’ performance. They are unlikely to take the initiative to communicate with their teachers face-to-face; providing an evaluation option gives them a chance to anonymously comment on their teachers.
For one thing 在功能上相当于 firstly, 建议大家多多使用, 除了不落俗套,还能增加字数。
In addition, these evaluations give the teachers an opportunity to improve their methods and teaching styles. Without feedback from their students, teachers might use the same educational techniques for years without realizing they are ineffective or incorrect. Evaluations create a chance for teachers to innovate and improve.
In addition 搭配之前的 for one thing, 这个用法请记住要配套使用。
To summarize, I believe that student evaluations are an important part of educational experience. They create a more positive environment for everyone involved.
结尾段简单清楚阐述自己的观点,这个观点与开头段一致。
下篇预告:两种择友方式
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of these two ways.
你先写一版,稍后对比老外的范文可以印象更深刻。加油哦!