手工和机器哪个好

Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? 

词汇提示

machine-made products 机器制造出来的产品

Daily lives are fast-paced. 日常生活节奏快。

Handmade crafts are produced at a deliberate (adj. 从容的;不慌不忙的;审慎的;小心翼翼的)  speed.

handmade， handcrafted, made by hand手工制作

consistent adj. 一致的

unique， one-of-a-kind, special adj. 独一无二的、特别的

meticulously， carefully， deliberately adv. 小心翼翼地、仔细地。

下面是老外写的范文:

There are some that prefer to do any and all work with their hands alone; others prefer to rely on complex machinery to aid them in their work. Personally, I prefer to use my hands to get things done in most circumstances. However, there are two sides to the story.

这是标准的开头: 一些人……; 另一些人…… 。我个人的选择是……， 预示着主体段将从两个角度来分析展开。

Those that prefer to use machines in their work make a good point: machinery is much less likely to fail than a man’s hands. Manufactured products are consistent, durable and cheap to produce, from a factory owner’s standpoint. There are many reasons to use complex machinery in our daily work.

这段从一个角度分析了机器生产的优势。

However, for some tasks, the human touch simply cannot be replaced. One would never expect a machine to paint a work of art or produce a beautiful sculpture. No, for these kinds of work, hands and hands alone are the best tools one can have.

本段用however 转折到另一个观点，指出人工手工室创意类工作不可替代的。

In conclusion, I believe that working with one’s hands is preferable in may circumstances, but not all. Sometimes, a machine is just the tool you need.

结尾段先重复自己的观点， 但是也没有完全否定另外一面， 留有合理的余地。

也就是说，这种议论文， 不用非黑即白， 而是可以分情况讨论的， 在特定条件下， 二者都有合理之处。

作业： 大家可以通过范文，自己再修改一下第一稿， 欢迎在评论区贴出你的第二稿。

预告： 下一篇的范文题目是：

教师要由学生来评价吗？

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or Disagree?

请你自己先写第一稿。范文下期公布。