一、方法指导
这次方法指导真的对我太有用了。让我反思了我的英语学习。
最初的反思随着时间的流逝又会产生新的问题、又会有没有改掉的问题。感谢写作反馈,能让我不断审视自己的学习状态。
1、打卡,写例句、写学习的感受和自己探索到的东西就可以了。
【粘贴例句说的就是我,现在想来还不如认真仔细地读几遍句子、背一背,复制粘贴并不会帮助我更好地记住】
2、push/nudge yourself out of the comfort zone! low-hanging fruit 容易得到的×
【说得也是我!多试试自己还可以有什么表达,把自己想表达的看能不能更好、更贴切的表达,才是有针对性的提升!】
3、deceptively/seeingly simple?看似简单的笨方法 坚持下去 其实才是很有效的。哪有那么多捷径呢?一字一句地精学吧。
4、用社群辅助自己的学习,按照自己的特点来安排自己的学习。
【永远不要做出学习的样子follow the routine!认真好好享受英语学习的快乐就可以了。】
如果想要更好地提高自己的写作的话,背诵是必要的。
5、什么写作素材值得自己学习?
新概念三四册、英语母语国家的经典读物(The norton reader)、经典演讲TED之类的、经济学人等外媒。
6、如何仿写?
I 理解、内化段落逻辑【如何展开?这个我目前基本不思考这部分 反思!】
II 临摹
1)激活自己的消极词汇:bring about unintended consequences(week 2 仿写) startup(开动) the chance
2)不会的部分去查:用到safeguards entrant(参加者、新加入者)【牛津搭配词典 同义词词典】
3)小小的偏离(deviation departure)也还好。
4)/word choice/ 有动态的短语:Pose challenge 有意识替换一些僵硬的表达。
5)一些常见的用法要注意:city council/ local authorities、partition shield (Google查一下 多种查找方式)
6)【高级】cobble together (心情杂乱 不一定指把事情弄得乱) fine-tune 调音
7)精确、多样表达:security personnel、passengers(×people)
替换实词、不要轻易改变句式结构!
7、如何利用每周一段?
背诵、临摹、看他人、只字不差。
二、问题清单参考
1、主谓一致:变更主语的时候需要特别注意!
2、突然加上一些形容词,就需要注意自己的冠词。
3、搭配不当:学习素材要吃透,英英词典的例句、搭配词典都可以有帮助、Netspeak.org、语料库。
4、不注意书写规范:大小写、标点、拼写。
5、完全临摹例句,不要想当然。写作清晰、准确、地道。
三、学习好段落
1、罗罗:【场景】父母如何应对小孩玩电子产品。
仿写:Many parents are cobbling together strategies to cope. An extreme reaction is to prohibitthe(禁止) children from using digital products(entirely). A more subtle(微妙、敏锐、精细的) approach is to limit the usage time to half an hour a day, so that the parent-child relationship won't go wrong due outright refusal. A third tactic concerns shifting their attention to reading or outdoor activities.
2、※Yip Chin Lum: 【场景】中国政府如何应对资本外逃和人民币大幅跳水…(supposed but not necessarily real)
仿写:The government is cobbling together strategies to cope with the yuan plunge【小改变】. An extreme reaction is to ban capital out flowentirely, which will reverse the effort towards more market-oriented currency. A more subtle approach is to tighten capital control by restricting overseas investment channels available to mainland investors, while avoiding direct intervention on a large scale to support renminbi. A third tactic, arguably the solution that holds good for all time, concerns adopting the much-needed reform that can bolster(鼓励)market confidence in Chinese economic fundamentals.
(show a fairly high degree of sophistication)
flawless impeccable 没什么瑕疵
交代背景和含义implications
3、自观问渠【大篇幅解释规则※】
Local authorities are cobbling together strategies to cope. An extreme reaction is to tow(拖拉拽) every illegal parker. A more subtle approach is to fine each offender 200 RMB and impose 2【10以上的才用数字】 demerit pointson each violation, so that the driver’s license will be suspended and he will have to attend the Traffic Violator School after having accumulated 12 points. A third tactic,arguably the most effective of all, concerns driving restrictions【concerns stricter driving restrictions】 on offenders.歧义
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