题目：
Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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With the constant promotion of globalization, various culture merges into and conflicts with each others.It is assumed that multicultural communication brings great advantages for the country, since every culture is unique and has its own peculiar enchantment. Although multicultural societies have some some negative issues，I deem that it should embraced with more optimism.
Support1:使大家接触不同的文化，拓宽视野，增加社会的活力和多样性+举例子
The interaction of diverse cultures shapes the country more alive and fascinating, as it …… while……. It means people living in this environment have more opportunity to experience different customer and life style to broaden horizon, so that they are encouraged to **consider issues from different perspective. **……
ethnic 种族的
enchantment [ɪnˈtʃɑ:ntmənt]
issue指社会重大的问题
This is an inevitable trend
Deem常用于主观想象 以为 视为 看作等
More significantly
view the world from different angles口语
举例子
Currently, there exist some people who are willing to sell their own body organs or even their virginity in order to pursue an extravagant way of life which they might not be able to afford at that moment, which can be seen as an example of irrational consumption.
First, ads disturb our life. Surely, we all have the experience that an insert of the information about a product often interrupts our pleasure of watching an exciting film on T.V, which makes us so annoyed that sometimes we have the impulse to call the T.V station to make a complaint。
What’s more annoying is that you have spent money on a newspaper, but you’ll find that most of the space in the newspaper is occupied by all kinds of disgusting ads about a medicine of dealing with sexual diseases, which has totally violated your previous desire of getting the news about what is happening。
