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1. 原文: "In the west of Hubei in early spring, the spirit of water, the beauty of mountains, the swaying of bamboo, and the lingering rain constitute a beautiful picture."

  修改: "In early spring, the western part of Hubei transforms into a picturesque scene with spirited waters, majestic mountains, swaying bamboo, and gentle rain."

  修改说明: 简化句子结构，使其更清晰。

2. 原文: "The mountains and waters of western Hubei are beautiful, just like a huge emerald, which makes people amazed."

  修改: "The mountains and waters of western Hubei are stunning, resembling a vast emerald that amazes onlookers."

  修改说明: 使描述更流畅自然。

3. 原文: "There are not only towering mountains, but also rippling lakes, dense forests and murmuring streams."

  修改: "It boasts not only towering mountains but also rippling lakes, dense forests, and murmuring streams."

  修改说明: 调整连词使用，使句子更协调。

4. 原文: "Enshi,my hometown , a small city in Central China , is located in the western Hubei province."

  修改: "Enshi, my hometown, is a small city in Central China, located in the western part of Hubei province."

  修改说明: 纠正标点和空格的使用，增加定冠词“the”。

5. 原文: "The city is nestled in the mountains , wit h lush green hills and deep valleys."

  修改: "The city is nestled in the mountains, with lush green hills and deep valleys."

  修改说明: 纠正拼写错误和空格问题。

6. 原文: "On the streets of Enshi, you can see lush bamboo forests and verdant tea plantations."

  修改: 无需修改。

  修改说明: 句子已经很地道，不需要调整。

7. 原文: "They live

  修改: 此处原文不完整，无法提供修改。

  修改说明: N/A

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