甘比英文拓展写作-描述风景-蛋小蛋joyce

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As can be seen from the picture,the silent valley is traversed by a gentle brook with a slow pace.It seems to be a shallow stream which is meandering through the moist soil,the swirling water is so clear(改为limpid )that you could see the bottom.Over the stream,the space is covered by various boughs(改为various boughs lie across two parallel  shores) some of them are scattering around the trickle.

   Staring at the trees alongside the river,you may find they are all in darkgreen(改为forestgreen and saddle brown)suit,and the  fallen red leaves kiss the ground in a harmonious way.(加一句The ground is patched with moss,as soft as velvets A few of the boughs bridge over the brook but  not causing a feeling of mess.(删掉换成when viewed at a distance,the lush forest  resembles a scene in a fairytale it's not hard for you to imagine there are some  mysterious animals gazing at you somewhere )

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