一 段 ：①In recent years, we are bombarded by the magazines and websites with the topic about_____________. 最近，我们被报纸和杂志上关于…的话题狂轰乱炸。
② There are different views concerning this topic. 就这一话题，人们的观点不尽相同。
备选： People’s attitudes towards whether___or whether___vary from person to person. 人们关于是否该…还是…的观点因人而异。
③ Some people believe that while others hold that__________. 一些人认为……,而另一些人则认为…… 备选：Some say that _______ , while others maintain that ________ .
④For my part, I am in favor of ______ . 备选：Personally I agree with the first/second opinion. 就我个人而言，我支持第一 / 二种观点。
bombard [bɒmˈbɑ:d]
v. 轰炸
concerning prep. 关于
vary v. 不同，相异
maintain [meɪnˈteɪn]
v.坚持说
preference[ˈprefrəns]
n. 偏爱
in favor of 支持
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Some people claim love is the most important in a happy marriage, while others believe money plays a decisive role. What is your opinion?
幸福婚姻中是爱情重要还是钱重要？
【第一段】
①In recent years, we are bombarded by the magazines and websites with the topic about the key elements of a happy marriage.
② There are different views concerning this topic. / People's attitudes towards whether love is more important or whether money is more important in a happy marriage vary from person to person.
③ Some say that love plays a critical role in a happy marriage while others maintain that it is money that determines the happiness of a marriage.
④ Personally, I agree with the second opinion because money, being the foundation of a marriage, is definitely more important than love in a happy marriage.
【二段模板】
① Among various reasons which make me think ___, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
②【论点一】My first reason is that without , __________will probably end in failure. 原因一：没有……,……将会以失败而告终。
③A typical example is that _________ . 一个典型的例子是……
④【论点二】My second reason is that _________. 原因二是……
⑤ _________ is often cited as an example. ……经常作为一个例子被引用。
⑥【论点三】：My third reason is that _______ . 原因三是…… 备 选 ：Another reason which can not be overlooked is that________________. 另一个不容忽视的原因是……
① Among various reasons which make me think money plays a key role in a happy marriage, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
② My first reason is that without money, most of marriages will probably end in failure.
③ A typical example is that in nearly all parts of the country, house and car, which are believed to be essential conditions for a marriage, are absolutely necessary when two get married.
④ If a couple get married without a house, the marriage will be called a “naked marriage”, which implicates the instability of the marriage.
⑤ My second reason is that when choosing to give birth to children, money will become more important for a couple because they have to raise the children.
⑥The proverb that poor couples sorrow is often cited as an example.
⑦ Another reason which can not be overlooked is that love will fade as time goes by.
⑧ Once love has gone, a marriage without economic foundation is easily destroyed.
三段：
In view of the above reasoning, I am convinced that . 鉴于上面的论证，我坚信…… 备选： From the above discussion, we can easily conclude that . 通过上面的讨论，我们很容易得出结论……
① In view of the above reasoning, I am convinced that, compared with love, money plays a more decisive role in a happy marriage.
② Learning the truth that money is more important does not mean love is not important at all.
③ It is another important element in a happy marriage.
④ I wish each couple gets married for the sake of love and meanwhile works hard to lay a good economic foundation for their marriage.
经典模板
一段：①______________ is a buzzword in our era.
二段、② An increasing number of people admit that ____________ exerts a bad influence on our health and meanwhile will affect the development of the mankind in the long run. 越来越多的人承认 XX 对我们的健康有不利影响，并且从长远来看会影响到整个人类的发展。
③ To respond to/cope with this situation, we are supposed to find the causes of the problem and then take drastic measures to prevent it from becoming more serious. 要应对这一情况，我们应该找到问题的原因，并采取严厉措施来防止情况变得更糟。
buzzword [ˈbʌzwɜ:rd]
n. 流行语
exert [ɪɡ'zɝt] v. 运用、发挥
be supposed to do sth
应该做…
drastic [ˈdræstɪk]
严厉的，猛烈的
prevent [prɪˈvent]
v. 防止
主体段：[原因方面]
① A number of factors might contribute to/ account for this problem and I will explore the most obvious ones here.
② First and foremost,______________________ .
③ Furthermore,_____________________.
④ Last but not least,_______________________.
三段：[措施段]
① If we can not take effective and drastic measures, we may not control the situation, and some undesired results may come out unexpectedly.
②From the macro view, government is supposed to formulate relevant rules to control the environmental problems and enhance the environmental education.
③From the micro view, individuals should realize the significance and urgency of environment protection and become an environmental guardians, setting themselves as an example to others.
