大作文写作的思路
- 权利-人-人性化-尊重权利
- 产业的升级必然导致传统产业的淘汰,对于这两种产业的人各有利弊
- 经济-征税-省钱-腐败
- 健康-减少疲劳(长期坐车)
- 环境-自然灾害(农作物)
- 安全-战争冲突-可靠(交通工具)
- 效率-方便
大作文写作观点
1.交通堵塞解决-公共交通,限制车数,减少交通量。提供实时路况信息, 升级道路系统
2.广告的作用:增加销量,鼓励人们购买,告知人们产品的信息
3.新闻的作用:告诉人们最新的资讯(the lastest news and information),提供重要事件讯息(important events) 扩展人们的知识和兴趣
- 消费者的特点:受潮流和趋势的影响(are influenced by trends)有不同的欣赏品味(have different tastes) 有不同的收入(incomes) 有不同的预算(budgets)有不同的消费习惯(have different spending habits)
- 交通污染治理:控制路上车辆数量,改进公共交通服务,步行或骑自行车上班,鼓励人们买环保型汽车,研发更清洁的能源
- 个人履行环境义务的方式:坚持环保的生活方式,重复使用购物袋(reuse shopping bags),循环使用瓶瓶罐罐(recycle cans and bottles),选择塑料包装次数较少的产品(products with less plastic packaging),更多地使用公共交通,步行或骑车去上班
- 政府履行环境义务的方式:改进公共交通服务,通过立法保护环境,对污染环境的公司罚款(find companies that pollute the environment),为清洁能源的研究提供资助(give financial support to research on clean energy)
- 不健康饮食和缺乏锻炼引起的疾病:heart disease, diabetes, obesity, high blood pressure
吸烟,空气污染引起的疾病:asthma, lung cancer - 人口老龄化带来的问题:劳动力短缺,医疗系统压力,加重纳税人的负担(increase the burden on taxpayers)
人口老龄化的解决办法:为退休养老存钱,提高法定退休年龄(raise the retirement age), 鼓励其他的国家向本国移民(encourage immigration)
大作文写作常用的词
- incurable
- vitamin C and fibre
- priceless invaluable
- ancestor
- customs and traditions
- characteristics 特征
- frustrated 失落的
- technological 技术的
- children of a similar age 相似年龄的孩子
- bungee jumping
- affordable cheap
- manage my time
make the best use of their time 更充分地利用他们的时间 manage their money well 管理好他们的财务 - allow sb. to do
- prevent sb. from doing
- on a regular basis
- eating habits 饮食习惯 spending habits 花钱习惯
- get/achieve good grades 得到好的成绩
- boost their brain development 促进脑力发展
boost 还有提高的意思
boost productivity 提高生产率
boost economic growth 促进经济的增长
boost tourism 促进旅游业的发展
boost national pride 提升公众的民族自豪感
boost their performance 提升他们(工作或学习)的表现 - intelligent 聪明
- expand/broaden their horizons 开阔眼界
broaden their knowledge/skills/interests - take part in/ participate in
- family bonds 亲情
- money-management skills 管理财务的能力
- prepare them for adult life 帮他们准备成年以后的生活
prepare them for later life 帮他们准备以后的生活
帮助满足... 的要求
比如:
prepare them for the job market 帮助他们适应就业市场的需求
prepare them for the future workforce 帮助他们满足未来对劳动力的要求
prepare them for the knowledge-based economy帮助他们适应以知识为主导的经济 - gain practical experience 获得实践经验
- fairly 公平地 平等地 (常用,大的方面社会常用)equally 平等地
inequality 不公平 - improve their employability 增强他们的就业适应性
- 一般议论文学习的名词是使用learning
- cause distractions for 对... 造成干扰
- studies 学业 concentrate on their studies 专注于他们的学业
- 动力 motivation 有动力 motivated 没有动力的 unmotivated
- labour-saving 节约人力的
- improve 改善
- service服务是可数名词 加s
- the volume of traffic 交通量
- traffic information 路况信息
- inform sb. about sth. 告知默认某事
inform people about new products - advertising 不可数,广告宣传, advertisement 可数,指广告的数量
fast food advertising 快餐广告 - peers 同龄人
- make the country more competitive让国家更有竞争力
make the country less competitive 削弱国家的竞争力 - labour shortages 劳动力短缺 (要加s)
- restrict limit 限制
- schedule timetable 时间安排
- study at their own pace 按照他们的进度学习
- spend more time with their family 更多地和家人在一起
- save money on transport costs 节省交通费(要加s)
- job security 工作的稳定性
- treat 对待
- choose subjects 选课
- educational opportunities/ opportunities for education受教育机会
vocational opportunities/ opportunities for employment 工作机会
opportunities for promotion 晋升机会 - share parenting responsibilities(父母)双方共同承担养育孩子的机会
- gender 男性和女性(性别)
traditional gender roles 传统男性和女性的社会角色 - ensure 确保
ensure equal opportunities for all students 确保学生获得公平的机会
ensure equal opportunities for all applicants 确保每个申请者获得公平的机会
ensure fairness 确保公平 - violate their privacy 侵犯他们的隐私(violate很好的词)
- gender bias 性别偏见
- security cameras 安全监控摄像头
- teach children the difference between right and wrong/ tell right from wrong 教孩子明辨是非
- build family bonds/ strengthen family bonds 增进亲情
- 合作解决问题 solve problems together
- 能创造有用价值的社会成员 useful members of society
- 生活忙忙碌碌 have a busy lifestyle
- have traditional ideas about many things 对很多事物持有保守的看法
- lead to misunderstanding 导致误解
- provide a broad and balanced curriculum 提供科目广泛、不偏科的课程安排
core subjects 核心课
required/compulsory subjects 必修课
optional subjects 选修科目 - well-rounded education 全面发展的教育
- 他们的国家 用country
- national security 国家安全
- state pensions 公共养老金
- the power supply system 供电系统
the water supply system 供水系统 - create jobs/create employment opportunities 创造就业
- take jobs away from 抢走...的就业机会
- fulfill family responsibilities 履行家庭责任(同样的还可以有社会责任,环境责任)
- introduce laws to 引入立法
- is a long-term(short-term) solution 是长期(短期)有效的解决方法
- impractical 不可行的
- advertising aimed at children 针对孩子的广告
- regulate ... 对... 进行严格的监管 regulate fast food advertising
- Genetically modified food
- run campaigns 举办大型的系列宣传活动
advertising campaigns 大型的广告系列宣传活动 - create waste and pollution 产生垃圾废料和污染
- waste 污染 废料 垃圾
household waste 家用生活垃圾
industrial waste 工业废料 - put ... at risk
- smog 雾霾 acid rain 酸雨
- mode of transport 交通运输方式
road transport公路运输
air transport 航空运输 - reduce people's dependence on cars 减少人们对某事物的依赖
- social networking websites 社交网站
- rely too much on/rely heavily on 过度、严重地依赖
- renewable(non-renewable) energy sources (不)可再生的能源
- increase greenhouse gas emissions 导致温室气体排放量增加(emission加s)
contain harmful chemicals 含有毒的化学物质 - put pressure on ...给...造成压力
- 快速增长 grow rapidly
- the demand for consumer goods 对于消费者的需求
- meet/fulfill their environmental resposibilities履行对环境的义务
- 过于拥挤 overcrowded
- 城市居民:urban residents/ city dwellers ,urban 和rural只能做形容词
- 感觉自己的生活和大自然脱节:feel disconnected from nature
- crop yields 农作物产量
- pose health risks to consumers 对消费者造成健康方面的风险
- wildlife habitats 野生动植物栖息地(wildlife既包括野生动物也包括野生植物)
wildlife products 野生动植物制成的产品
wildlife reserves 野生动植物保护区 - become extinct 灭绝
- conduct/perform/do animal experiments 做动物实验
- cause pain to them 给它们造成伤害
- are kept in cages 被关在笼子里
- is cruel and inhumane残忍的和不人道的
morally wrong 不道德的 - reduce their suffering 减少它们的痛苦
reduce the risk of heart disease - medicine 作为不同药物可数,作为药物的统称不可数
- home-cooked food 家里做的饭菜
- is more nutritious 是更有营养的
- frozen food 冷冻食品
- sugary drinks 含糖量很高的饮料
- hand-eye coordination 手眼协调能力
- raise people's health awareness 提高人们的健康意识
- rising life expectancy 上升的人口预期寿命
- damage their emotional health 对他们的心理健康有害
- physical and emotional health 身心健康
- are under great pressure with their studies 在学业中承受很大的压力
- 激烈的竞争 tough(keen) competition for (jobs/promotion/business)
- save for the future 为将来储蓄
save for retirement - buy things on impulse 冲动地购物
- have high credit card debts 拖欠很高的信用卡债务
- follow the lastest trends 追随最新的时尚潮流
- involve high costs 涉及到高昂的费用
involve high risks 涉及到很高的风险
involve many challenges 涉及很多的挑战 - low-cost flight 低价航班
- are driven by profit 是受盈利目的驱动的
- rely on governments for money 依赖政府的援助
- have more important concerns 还有其他急需关注的问题
- only have limited funds 只有有限的资金
- are funded by 是由... 资助的
are under-funded 资金不足 - is a important source of government tax revenue 是政府税收的重要来源
advertising revenue 广告费的收入
admission revenue 门票费的收入
个人的角income 机构和政府的叫做revenue - 养老金体系 state pension system
- souvenirs 纪念品
- take away jobs from local people 抢走当地人的就业机会
- drive local companies out of business 导致当地企业很难生存
- misuse 滥用
- donor countries 援助国
recipient countries 受援国 - are interconnected 国家之间、经济之间是相互联系的
- deter dangerous driving 震慑危险驾驶的行为
- reform criminals 改造罪犯
- career guidance 就业指导
- have a criminal record 有犯罪记录
- harsh punishments 给他们严厉的惩罚
- resentment 怨恨情绪
- are likely to re-offend 可能会再次犯罪
- serve long sentence长时间服刑
- are sent to prison 被关进监狱
- address the root cause of crime 从根本解决犯罪问题
- threaten people's safety 威胁人们的安全(threaten是动词 threat 是名词)
- increase people's fear of crime 导致人们对于犯罪的恐惧感上升
- areas with high crime rates 犯罪高发区
- increase police patrols强化治安巡逻
- violent images 暴力的画面
- develop anti-social behaviour 形成反社会行为(涂鸦 graffiti 吵闹的聚会noisy parties 校园欺凌 school bullying)
- glorify violence 美化暴力
- Internet crime 网络犯罪
- computer hackers 电脑黑客
spread computer viruses 传播电脑病毒 - online fraud 网络诈骗
- pay fines 交罚金
- install red light cameras 安装交通灯监控摄像头
install speed cameras 安装超速监控摄像头 - protect national security 保卫国家的安全
- wars and conflicts 战争和冲突
- military technology 军事科技
- serve in the armed forces/serve in the military 服役
- heritage 文化传承
protect their heritage
better understand their heritage
form an important part of their heritage - erode their cultural identity 削弱他们的文化认同感
- a multi-cultural society 多元文化社会
- are more tolerant of cultural differences 对待文化更加宽容
- transcend national borders 超出了国家之间的边界
- draw on other countries' experience
- weaken their cultures 削弱其他的文化
- is widely used around the world 在全世界范围内广泛地使用
- language barriers 交流过程中的语言障碍(消除用remove)
- expansion 扩张
the expansion of English
the expansion of the Internet
the expansion of multinational companies - is spoken by a small number of people 很少人会说
- dominant language 主流语言
- connect us to the past 帮助我们了解、感受过去
- famous landmarks 著名的标志性建筑
- give character to a city 赋予一座城市鲜明的特色
- historic sites 历史遗迹
historical attractions 历史景点 - adapt old buildings to meet modern needs 让老房子适应现代生活的需要
- renovate old buildings 老房子翻新
update the equipment 对设备进行更新
remodel old buildings 对老房子进行改造
demolish old buildings 摧毁老房子 - expensive repairs and maintainance 昂贵的维修和保养
- enrich the local culture 丰富当地的文化
- bring art into people's everyday life
- feel respected and valued 感觉受到了尊重和重视
- build a positive corporate culture 建设积极的企业文化
- increase employees' loyalty to the company 提高员工对于公司的忠诚度
- mobile games 手机游戏
video games 电子游戏
educational games 益智游戏(online math games/ online language games) - a wide range of /a variety of 广泛的
- satellite television 微型电视
cable television有限电视 - encourage imagination (激发想象力)
- are fun and educational 寓教于乐的
- in a virtual world 在一个虚拟的世界
in real life 在真实的生活中 - share ideas and opinions 分享想法和意见
- cause social isolation 导致脱离社会的生活方式
- have access to more information 可以获得更多的消息
- traditional shops/ physical shops 实体店
- can get help quickly in an emergency 遇到紧急情况可以迅速获得帮助
- pose health risks to users 对使用者构成健康方面的风险
- boost the sales of products 提升产品的销量
- build consumer loyalty 建立消费者的品牌忠诚度
- career path 职业发展道路
choose career path that really interest them - feel bored and unmotivated 感到无聊没有动力
- fall into a routine 陷入按部就班的常规
- repetitive tasks 重复的乏味的任务
- explore the local culture 探索当地的文化
- power 力量,作用
- entertaining 娱乐性的
- get to school ages 到了上学的年龄
- insignificant 不重要的
大作文语法注意
- more和加er的比较级不能连着用
- spoilt 宠爱的被动语态
大作文常用句型
- 对比 instead of/rather than
- if sb. ... then sth be done by sb.
- another benefit of ... is that
- ... means that
- the solution to the problem lies with ... who/which need to do
- 后置定语如 support families more in raising their children