有人可以帮忙修改错误的吗？

Posting a form of writing a chain of formula to live and leisure pursuits down and expend your energy to read it everyday.Your habbits can be shaped by this approach.Do not to give up the far-reaching process in the midway.So your those what you run will be futile.It's a topic that worth to thinking deliberate ，which also is a distinction that depend on you win or others win in advance.

求改