本周我们来看一道老题,出自2014年大纲卷,体裁为近几年已经被逐渐淘汰的议论文,但有所西安的学校本次高三月考就出了这道题。
这道题的考察形式跟现在的全国卷略有区别,具体区别如下,同学们稍作了解即可:
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(V);如有错误(每行 只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(/ )划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 .
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
原题如下:
All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________
between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________
ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________
impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________
their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship 81.______________
should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________
wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________
The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________
one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________
第一句All of us need friendship,典型的主谓宾结构,无误,the understanding做第二句的主语,因此第76题答案为在横线后打对勾“V”。
既然第二句主语是understanding,谓语动词应该用第三人称单数,因此第77题答案为mean改成means.
第二句中and为连词,后面省略了前面出现过的主语both of them,have similar ideas和trust each other前后并列,因此第78题答案为trusting改成trust.
it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long,这句中,有个代词的考点:根据后文的each other可知,他们是相互帮助的,因此第79题答案为him改成friends.
注意:代词改名词,现在高考全国卷中已经剔除了这种考法,大家稍作了解即可,碰到模拟题中这么考,忽略即可。
make their friendship to last long这句,make后用不带to的不定式,即make sb do sth,因此第80题答案为删掉"to".
So really friendship should...这句中friendship为名词,用形容词作定语修饰名词,因此第81题答案为really改成real.
should为情态动词,后面再跟动词必须用其原形,因此第82题答案为在should和able之间加动词原形“be”.
And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can. 根据句意,我们拥有尽可能多的朋友是明智的,这里考察的是as . . . as句型用法。因此第83题答案为that改成as.
The more friends we have, the more we can learn for one another. 根据句意,我们拥有的朋友越多,越能从朋友身上学到更多,此题考察介词的误用:for的本义是为了...,而这里表示从哪儿学习,所以第84题答案为for改成from,from本义为从哪儿来,来自哪儿。
...,but the more pleasure we can share together. 这句需要注意连词前后的逻辑关系,这里的连词前后为并列关系,不是转折关系,因此第85题答案为but改成and.
做题从来不重要,对错题的及时总结和复盘更重要,后者才是我们真正提高的开始。这句话,送给因为这道题没答好,而闷闷不乐的张同学。
就短文改错题型,这种考法现在全国卷中已经被摒弃,把这种题再拿出来给学生做测试,这位英语老师不是在偷懒就是在瞎搞,让人无语。