咱们今儿个就用一个老题先来和大家讲讲雅思大作文Report类的框架和展开吧
雅思写作的Report类,你都了解吗?
Many businesses think that the new employees who graduate from school lack business interpersonal skills, such as working with colleagues as a team. What are the causes and solutions?
Tips:
Report类的文章其实相当于社会报道,要求对某一种现象/趋势作出分析,一般会要求写causes/ effects/ solutions/ problems等,文章可以分段论述原因/ 结果/ 影响/ 解决措施,也可以穿插进行。
开头段:引出话题(很多毕业生初入社会,缺乏职场上所需的人际交往能力)+ 概述说明
「Sample」
Presently, many graduates from school lack business interpersonal skills, which may pose a threat to their career development. The phenomenon can be attributed to several reasons, and it is important to understand how to reverse the situation.
主体段一:原因1⃣️
主题句
导致这种现象的原因之一是大学生自己在校期间不注重交际能力的培养。
+ 支撑句
1.有的忙于学习,科目太多,考试太多,没时间交朋友;2.有的沉迷网络,宅在寝室,不愿意出去社交,喜欢在游戏里交朋友。
主体段一:原因2⃣️
主题句
另一个原因是学校只给学生提供传授硬性知识的平台、只在乎学业成绩的高低,不给学生们提供交际能力提升的机会。
+支撑句
1.学校的教学大纲,很少有关于人际交往的课程;2.面临就业的压力、同辈的竞争,导师/老师/校领导都会期待学生出更好的成绩。
这里给各位框架句式喔~but 内容要点给了拓展,动笔写靠自己
The first reason accounting for sth. is that...(表语从句)
「The first reason accounting for students' lack of communicative skills is that they don't value friendship highly when studying.」
Another reason that results in sth.(定语从句)is sth.
「Another reason that results in graduates' being unable to communicate efficiently with colleagues or employers is the school's little emphasis on such kind of skills.」
主体段二:解决措施(一般针对原因提出)
1.大学生应该不要沉迷虚拟网络,也要知道大学是培养综合能力的地方,要合理安排学习、休闲和社交的时间,花一定的时间去锻炼自己的能力;
2.学校可以就学生的人际交往开设一些相关课程、组织一些实践/聚会活动,帮助学生培养交际能力,还可以邀请一些企业家、工作的人来做经验分享。
结尾段:总结全文
To sum up, while new employees' lack of business interpersonal skills are attributed to several factors, if students themselves and the school can make some efforts together, the picture will be totally different.