With复合结构在读后续写中的运用

With复合结构在读后续写中的运用

“with复合结构” 即 “with+宾语+宾语补足语”,依附着句子而存在,起到丰富和充实句子内容的作用,因此,该结构有利于在续写中扩写句子。

在读后续写中,“with复合结构” 多用作原因状语或伴随状语,使得叙述的情节更具体;同时,在细节描写上使用该结构能形象、生动地营造画面,使得表达更深刻。掌握好以下关于“with复合结构” 的句型,将有效地助力读后续写。

结构1 with+n. /pron. +adj.

She left the office with the door open.她离开了办公室,门没关。(伴随)

结构2  with+n. /pron. +adv.  (极少数)

She fell asleep with all the lights on.她睡着了,所有的灯都还亮着。(伴随)

结构3 with+n. /pron. +介词短语

With a baby in her arms, the woman couldn’t run fast.

由于怀里抱着一个婴儿,那个女人跑不快。(原因状语)

结构4 with+n. /pron. +-ing分词 (主动,进行)

With the guide leading the way, we finally arrived at that village.

在向导的带领下,我们终于到达了那个村庄。(原因状语)

结构5  with+n. /pron. +-ed分词 (被动,完成)

With her purse stolen, she couldn’t be able to buy this beautiful dress.

由于钱包被偷了,她买不起这条漂亮的裙子。

结构6  with+宾语+to do (尚未发生)

With no one to talk to, John felt depressed.

由于没有可以说话的人,约翰感到很悲哀。

with+n+doing,主+谓+其他

With the sky turning dark gradually, Jane got lost in the forest.

(“with复合结构”在句中作原因状语, 用来推动情节,the sky与turn之间是主动关系,故用现在分词短语turning…说明 the sky。)

After a while she saw some zebra with black and white lines going beneath their stomachs.

With tears welling up in my eyes, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.

He rushed to the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing.

With her eyes sparkling,she struggled to her feet and shouted, "I’m here!"

The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me(代词宾格) continuing to scan the horizon for a familiar landmark.

With tears streaming down his cheek, he replied, “I did try. I really tried.”

With the boy leading the way, we finally found the splendid hotel.


With+n+done,主+谓+其他

The rooms were full of children with lanterns fastened on oak paneled walls.

(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语, 用来描写房间的装饰, lanterns与fasten之间是被动关系,故用过去分词短语fastened…说明lanterns。)

With all the things bought, she headed for home joyfully.

With her fingers cut, Joe burst into tears and her legs trembled.


With+n+介词短语,主+谓+其他

例句:他用喷雾向狼喷过去,其中一只手扶着栏杆。

He fired the spray at the wolf with one hand on the bars.

(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,介词短语on the bars说明one hand的放置之处, 以此来描写人物此时谨慎的动作。)

Upon arriving at the door of his home, he was surprised to discover that a little dog was watching him curiously with the expression of shock on its face.


With+n.+adj,主+谓+其他

例句:他这次摔倒了,背部着地,双腿叉开。

He fell over this time, flat on his back with his legs wide.

(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,形容词wide说明his legs的状态, 刻画出人物摔倒后的画面。)

他的妻子躺在床上,脸色苍白。

His wife lay in bed with her face pale.

(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,形容词pale说明her face的状况,刻画出妻子虚弱的神态。)

她怒气冲冲的冲了出去,门四敞大开。

She stormed out of the room, with the door wide open.

他转向我,眼中充满了恐惧。

He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.

On seeing Tom, Jane immediately hugged her husband, with his eyes full of pleasure.

With my eyes full of tears, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.

With his eyes full of terror, he stopped and turned to me.


with+n+to do,主+谓+其他

With so many different forms of poetry to choose from, students may eventually want to write poems of their own.


with+n+adv.,主+谓+其他,此处副词通常是指表示地点、方位的副词,如on/down/in/out/up/away。

例句:With her daughter away from home, she was worried.

With so many clothes on, she feels hot.

Mother asked her if/whether she was very hot with so many clothes on.


练一练

1.做完作业后,你就可以出去和朋友们玩了。

_________________________________________

2.有这么多工作要做,约翰没有时间去度假。

___________________________________

3.她点燃了一根火柴,然后看到了一棵美丽的树,上面挂着许多礼物。

_________________________________________

4.由于孩子们在上学,我们便可以去任何我们想去的地方。

________________________________________

5.她爱开着窗户睡觉。

________________________________________

6.站着的时候别把双手插在口袋里。

____________________________________


答案:

1.With your homework finished, you can go out and play with your friends.

2.With so much work to do, John has no time for holidays.

3.She lit a match and then saw a beautiful tree, with many gifts hanging on it.

4.With the children at school, we can go wherever we like.

5.She sleeps with the window open

6.Don't stand with your hands in your pockets.

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