如果围绕crime的话题给你出一道写作题目，那么什么是必会的呢？
···对，犯罪原因是肯定要分析分析的，不然怎么会有专门的犯罪心理研究呢？
「学生作文-开头段」
The number of crimes has increased in many countries. The phenomenon can be attributed to several reasons, and it is important to understand how to reverse the trend.
其实ta的开头段写得还不错，清晰明了。你们可以直接copy做模版：
「背景铺垫句」
The number of crimes has increased in many countries. 很多国家的犯罪率都在上升。
「引出下文句」
The phenomenon can be attributed to several reasons. 导致这种现象的原因有很多。
It is important to understand how to reverse the trend. 知道如何扭转这种趋势十分重要。
补充🉑️替换词汇/句式
犯罪率上升
1）The crime rate is increasing.
2) There are more people committing crimes.
3) The number of crimes has increased.
4) There are an increasing number of crimes.
**的原因有很多
1) There are many reasons for sth.
2) Sth. can be attributed to many factors.
3) Many factors can contribute to sth.
解决问题/扭转趋势
1) solve=tackle=address the problem
2) reverse the trend
中间段原因分析
原因1
Some people are likely to commit crimes owing to poverty. Some people are very poor for various reasons, but they are not willing to obtain wealth through hard work. They merely want to get money through some simple and quick ways, such as theft and robbery, but these behaviors are illegal.
实用表达积累
be likely to do sth. 有可能做某事
commit crimes/ do illegal things 犯法/ 犯罪
owing to poverty 因为贫穷
be not willing to do sth. 不愿意做某事
obtain wealth through hard work 通过努力/辛勤劳动获取财富
theft 偷窃
robbery 抢劫
原因2
Some people commit crimes after being in conflicts with others. When some people are criticized by their leaders or bosses and attacked by their friends, they will feel being despised or hurt, and they may take some extreme illegal actions to take revenge on others and seek for some comfort.
实用表达积累
8. be in conflict with sb. 与某人有冲突
9. be criticized by sb. 被某人批评
10. be attacked by sb. 被某人攻击
11. be despised 被鄙视
12. take revenge on sb. 向某人复仇
13. seek for comfort 寻求安慰
🔚 文末福利：核心段落二「犯罪问题如何解决呢」，几个小措施仅供参考
~~政府最厉害：
1) offer assistance to the unemployed 为失业人员提供帮助
2) take measures to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor 尽力缩小贫富差距
3) educate the public about the importance of obeying laws 教育大众守法的重要性
