原诗那个同位语感觉画蛇添足了
飞鸟集 180The sunshine greets me with a smile. The rain, his sad sister, talks to my heart. 阳光微笑着...
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The sunshine greets me with a smile. The rain, his sad sister, talks to my heart. 阳光微笑着...
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Woman, thou hast encircled the world’s heart with the depth of thy tears as the sea has...
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“世界”挺好的，是泰诗的固定意象
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Woman, thou hast encircled the world’s heart with the depth of thy tears as the sea has...
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“松涛”用得真妙
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Your smile was the flowers of your own fields, your talk was the rustle of your own mou...
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Your smile was the flowers of your own fields, your talk was the rustle of your own mou...
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诗歌的譬喻就是这样抽象得有些突兀，读多了散文确实会不习惯。
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Your smile was the flowers of your own fields, your talk was the rustle of your own mou...
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“大正”是什么……
早期白话“沉默”作“沉末”吗，interesting.飞鸟集 176
The water in a vessel is sparkling; the water in the sea is dark. The small truth has w...
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The water in a vessel is sparkling; the water in the sea is dark. The small truth has w...
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冯唐的莫名萌XD
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I spill water from my water jar as I walk on my way, Very little remains for my home. 一...
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这个它没有明确指代——其实指向日葵还有一层以德报怨的意味
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The sunflower blushed to own the nameless flower as her kin. The sun rose and smiled on...
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这个vessel实在不好处理，干脆和冯唐一样略去不译算了。这里sth of sth结构应该解作同位语，之前出现这个结构还勉强可以用……之……、……的……对应，这里实在不行
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I have dipped the vessel of my heart into this silent hour; it has filled with love. 我把...
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I have dipped the vessel of my heart into this silent hour; it has filled with love. 我把...
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又想了下，“思想食自己的言辞成长”好像也挺别扭，还是“飨”更宜
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Thought feeds itself with its own words and grows. 思想以自己的言语为食 渐渐成长 ---- 翻译手记： 比较难翻译地具象。...
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feed翻译成“喂养”不太典雅，翻译成“以……为食”又不凝练。不如用一“食”字，毕竟古文有使役用法。
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Thought feeds itself with its own words and grows. 思想以自己的言语为食 渐渐成长 ---- 翻译手记： 比较难翻译地具象。...
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冯大师有些翻译很凝练，就是喜欢be naughty……
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That which oppresses me, is it my soul trying to come out in the open, or the soul of t...
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That which oppresses me, is it my soul trying to come out in the open, or the soul of t...
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世界以痛吻我，要我报之以歌。
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The world has kissed my soul with its pain, asking for its return in songs. 世界带着伤痛亲吻了我的...